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"Get that syrup away from me"
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KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 2:40 pm


Kirby gets to be the first poster.

Too bad her story isn't quite good enough yet for j00 people...It needs editing, but I'm too lazy. And besides, the compouter with my writing crap (and the golden junk, you know) doesn't have the internet sweatdrop

Ah well, stand by and it'll be worth your while! wink

heart ya,

Kirby
PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 2:46 pm


You got the first post! DAMN!

Oh well Post some stuff about it! It's what the forum's about... dur.

BlackHawkGS


Tak-Jak
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 3:28 pm


We need to move all the stories in here..
Ah!
Lots and Lots of Work.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 4:07 pm


Tak-Jak
We need to move all the stories in here..
Ah!
Lots and Lots of Work.
Don't worry.

Between the three of us, we should be able to get it done fairly quickly.

Spastic waffles
Captain


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 9:08 pm


I am not a mod, so I can't help crying
not to mention I'm grounded wink shh don't tell.

My story is awesome, IMO...

The series is about the chosen of the country of Ametris, a legendary world of total peace...the legend is held dear to the people of Sirtema, (Ametris spelled backwards) only it isn't a legend, it's real...the chosen have saved them from wars and feuds and who knows what else, because Sirtema is always at war since that one time of civil unrest, when an uprising against the government turned into a war that lasted a thousand years...

And then a deity stopped the fighting, choosing the war's greatest hero, an elf named Haenir, to be the first chosen ever, and his descendants followed the line...

Here, pic time!

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Kamile, only without the creepy ears, in green, and generally happier...an elf, of course. One of the chosen--it is a very rare occasion when there are two, only precedented by the famous twin chosen Kilio and Tara.
Adjectives: cheerful, free-spirited, fierce, protective, brave, reckless, smart, yet compared to her fellow chosen she seems kind of slow.
Verbs: go, move, do something, explore, see, hear, feel. A doer of actions that need doing, a defender of what's right.
Nouns: elf, fighter, swordself, chosen, avatar of the goddess, adventurer, ball of charisma.

In a nutshell,
Kamile.

whichever nutcase decided to kill her off should be axe-murdered...O.o *dies*

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Everan, only I swear to the gods he's way cuter. The other chosen, often believed to be Kamile's twin (it's impossible, though--twins can't be born at exactly the same time, now can they?) They look alike in all aspects, but they act very differently...If you take away the confused look from this guy and make the hair black, it would look like him. (on a side note, both of them have silver eyes and a white scar on their foreheads).
Adjectives: Calm, quiet, clever, rational, cautious, also very protective
Verbs: watch, wait, listen...read, write, be, become...love, change, remember
Nouns: elf, chosen, magician, archer, intellect, wisdom, peace.

Only tapping the surface of
Everan. heart

Those are the two main characters, but I can't find a god picture of the others...I'll have to draw them...
PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 9:24 pm


AHA!

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Everan--sorta---pic one. wink

KirbyVictorious


KirbyVictorious

PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 6:03 pm


Okay...everyone remember that evil person who doesn't have a name? Henceforth to be known as [Nameless]?

Well, he still doesn't have a name. O.o
But he has a picture!

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Don't you HATE him?

I do.

No one kills my characters but ME. He's karmic toast. *cracks knuckles.*

Oh, and I found this too.
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The first thought that ran thorugh my mind was,
"That is one big-a** sword
So now, whenever I see this, I say to myself,
That's a big-a** sword.
xd
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