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 Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 6:37 pm
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Painful Memories
Pain from sad memories
Brings sorrow to your heart
The suffering it feels is of
Darkness and sorrow the
Pain from memories brings
Tears of sadness feeling
Sorrow, pain, and sadness
For eternity.
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Posted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 8:41 pm
I ish in t3h confuzzledishness zone...it makes sense but doesn't but eh. -_- *cough* Well I'd say its decent but I'm pretty confused without much punctuation.
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