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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 11:13 pm
eek I either had a dream/imagined this:
It was early in the morning, around 7:00am, as I went with my father to work. I then walked into the bathroom, unknowingly being followed by this super cute girl, who was my father's co-worker. I didn't really notice her until after I splashed my face with water to wake up. She then said "Someone's not a morning person." I was stunned and quickly wiped my face, realizing it was someone I had been admiring for awhile. blaugh I was shocked at first, then I smiled at her and said "Yeah!" I realized my heart begin to race faster and faster. sweatdrop I was never really good in these type of things...starting conversations...leading to something more. I didn't know what to do, until she said something unexpected in that lucious accent of hers. She said "I think that you're really beautiful and you'd probably be even more gorgeous with your hair down." She then slowly walks towards me, wraps her arm around me, and pulls off my ponytail. All the while, releasing lucious long, thick, wavy black hair as it slowly drops towards my back and sides of my face. I was astonished and I unexpectedly responded with, "But I'm not as beautiful as you." Our eyes then lock on each other, and begin to become watery. The tears start flowing once our lips met and continued to passionately kiss. We were both engulfed in mixed feelings of one another, while knowing that it might not work out as well as it should. Both aware of this, and all the while still locked lips...said nothing to one another. After awhile, we detached our lips, looked at one another. We smiled and giggled for a bit. She then looks serious, yet there was another look...it was in her smile...it was the look of something she was about to do. She then grabbed me by the waist, we embrace and kiss harder this time, and all the while pushing me to a nearby wall. Still in this heat of passion...her hands move from my waist to a bit up the front of my shirt...while I wrap my arms around her waist to grab her closer to my body. After a *bang* of bodies slamming on the stall wall, heavy breathing, and lip smacking...I move my right arm up the back of her shirt, while the left slowly moves down, pass her firm and juicy a**, and towards the back of her thigh, slowly moving it towards the front and upward and still on her thigh. She unlocks her gorgeous lips and slightly to let out a slight moan!!! I then start to kiss her neck, fondly licking, while her moans became louder increasing in intensity. eek She then grabs me around my waist and lifts me up on the counter where all the sinks are. After that she's still breathing heavily, and so was I, but not as intense as her. She then grabs my hanging legs that are hanging off the counter, in order to pull me closer to her. She gradually moves her hands slowly from my legs, towards the inner of my thighs. I am really excited at this point, and she knows this from my slight moan, closed eyes, and heavy breathing. In order to take it further she slowly moved her hand up my shirt again, but this time fondles my breast and squeasing it slightly tight. She kisses my neck and slightly bites hard, and by this time I said "Ahhh!!!!"
...kinda stopped from then on...and you get the picture...so did you people enjoy it?...
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Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 10:57 am
That was excellent. biggrin Good job... I think I need to take a shower now. ninja blaugh
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Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 8:36 pm
x BlackOut x That was excellent. biggrin Good job... I think I need to take a shower now. ninja blaugh Thanks!!! xd I just wrote it one night...but I kinda made some parts up...cause I didn't really remember exactly what happened in my dream...I forgot...but I improved a whole lot as you could see blaugh ...haha...shower... ninja
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Posted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 3:23 am
ninja I thought that actuely happened and i was thinking "damnit why cant i be that lucky!" ninja but very good
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 5:04 am
Very well done, I also need to take a cold shower now... ninja I wish I could write stuff as good as that! mrgreen
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 10:27 am
wow... that was descriptive. eek heart
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 11:22 am
eek >.> Erm... So beats my novels! D=
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 3:19 pm
THANKS GUYS!!! It just came to me one night...I kinda got it in a dream... but I improved it a whole freakin lot!!! eek and just had to write it to see if you people liked it too(and thought it was freakin HOT)... blaugh 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 3:28 pm
im not a yuri fanfic person. so, sorry. i didnt enjoy it. stopped on the bathroom stall part.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 6:51 pm
Yakura Shima im not a yuri fanfic person. so, sorry. i didnt enjoy it. stopped on the bathroom stall part. It's alright...it's your opinion after all. 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 2:06 pm
interesting...very detailed shall i say whee
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Posted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 8:33 pm
WhiteAcid interesting...very detailed shall i say whee ...yeah...it was a very detailed "dream" kinda...well I elaborated....hahaha blaugh
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Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 2:09 pm
wow thats a good storry.. now excuse me i have to "clean up"
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 8:39 pm
eek
ive have dreams like that every so often. But i am usually in controll of my dream and know it's a dream.
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Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:27 pm
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