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| It's a great idea! |
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 Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 5:50 pm
Please tell me if it's a good idea. I haven't started yet but I got an idea.
Well...it's a musical, or at least going to be a musical. (suggested by my friend. Heh... sweatdrop Here goes:
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The Fifth has planned a surprised birthday party for her apprentice, Haruno Sakura's eighteenth birthday. The reason: to get her mind of the boy she had loved. This is the party of the year for Konoha, seeing as it is the Hokage throwing it. Everyone becomes excited to surprise her, yet, they themselves become even more surprised when HE returns.
No one knows that Sasuke's objectives of returning to Konoha was to see to the death of the Fifth, meaning, kill her. But, he's thrown into confusion when he becomes closer than ever to Sakura; but his mind tells him otherwise and complete his mission.
Amidst it all, Tsunade-sama places a gen-justsu on Sakura so that she does not see Sasuke as himself, but as a young man named Raidon.
Will Sakura be able to see through all these deceptions hurled to her by none other than the people she cared most?
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I'm sorry, but, I can't describe it any better at the moment.
So, what do you think? Good? Bad? Honestly, I think that there's too much things going on. But I don't know what stuff to take out. ^_~
Forgot to add:: It will have to be a musical cuz I already found songs that are perfect for this and I told my friend it would be a musical. Or, would making it a musical be... sad ?
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Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 6:45 pm
it's a good idea I like it it's really cool.
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Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 7:58 pm
Yoshi_fan it's a good idea I like it it's really cool. Really? thanks. I may be inspired to write it just because you all inspire me. But,we'll see.
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Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 7:59 pm
Actually, I did write a prologue. I may put it up for a preview and see what people think about it. sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 11:22 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 6:39 am
looks like a great idea! way 2 go! 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 7:10 am
Ooh... musical, you say? I almost want to watch it rather than read it...
Anyway, I think that it's got a good thing going on, and me being always on the lookout for SasuSaku writers, I think that you should push through with it.
One thing though - I'm not sure I get why Tsunade would turn Sasuke into another person. Sure, plotwise, I get it, but what would Tsunade's reasons be? If you'd make it clearer, I'm sure it'll turn out even better.
Cheers!
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 11:36 am
tenshinohana-chan Ooh... musical, you say? I almost want to watch it rather than read it...
Anyway, I think that it's got a good thing going on, and me being always on the lookout for SasuSaku writers, I think that you should push through with it.
One thing though - I'm not sure I get why Tsunade would turn Sasuke into another person. Sure, plotwise, I get it, but what would Tsunade's reasons be? If you'd make it clearer, I'm sure it'll turn out even better.
Cheers! Oh, Tsunade's reasons for the party was for Sakura to get Sasuke off her mind (to forget him and move on to someone new). Sakura hasn't been the happy Sakura lately--since he left. So, Tsunade turned Sasuke into another person so that she can't recognize him. Heh, let's say Tsunade doesn't like Sasuke one bit. xd Watch it? Lol. That's the same thing my friend put. She said, "I wish I could see it" So, just post if you want to see a preview!
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 12:35 pm
-raises hand- I'd really like to see the preview.
It's a great idea! ^__^
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 1:43 pm
Lol. Well, you'll have to wait a few days. Turns out I'm going somewhere for a few days. But, when I get back, I'll give you a preview. ^^
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 1:51 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 5:22 pm
KAWAII!!! this sounds like it's gonna be one great fic. you gotta give a preview! 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 8:16 pm
I think it's a good idea. You should totally do it.
And put up a preview, too! biggrin
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 1:08 am
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 11:27 am
Back from my trip.
Oh, well, since you all want a preview, I'll post one up...^_^
sweatdrop as soon as I find my notebook.
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