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 Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 7:45 am
Tears streaming down my face
Blood running down my arm
In a blink of an eye I'm gone
Lost without a trace
Without a hope of returning
Without the thought of a good tomorrow
Without you
Without me
Without anything
I set alone
And I cry
From my eyes and my veins I pour out to you
Wishing I could be with you
Wishing I would hold you in my arms
Hopping I could kiss it all better
Knowing this is the end
Not for the outside
But for the in
My soul is dying
slowly
Without you I cant hold on
My body slowly weakening
My knees give out
My face is pail
My bodies dieing to
This isn't you're thinking
It's not another attempt at suicide
Its death
Slowly brought upon by losing those I love
Its death
And this is all it is
Its death
Nothing more nothing less
Its just death
And now its what I am.
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 1:19 am
yah I'm the first to post. beautiful....I really like it.
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 7:27 pm
WitchHazal0713 yah I'm the first to post. beautiful....I really like it. LOL.. i seen...
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Posted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 2:34 pm
I really liked it! It was very beautiful!!<33
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Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 3:52 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 1:46 pm
very nice poem. ^^
I love it.
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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 10:55 pm
*gives you roses* ^^ i think it's beautiful. keep writing. ^^
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Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 7:14 am
wow, thats great.... keep the words com'in!! emo [lost for words in her mind]
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 2:39 pm
i like it.....very deep....
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