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 Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 5:09 pm
riding a shopping cart
wizzing passed old ladys who look at you funny
nearly chrasing into the kid with the suker
almost knoking over the carefully stacked raviolie cans
it's axerateing riding a speeding shopping cart
thru the over crowded shopping mart lanes
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Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 5:10 pm
i think its pretty good considering i pulled it out of my a**
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Posted: Sat Jul 08, 2006 4:19 pm
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