Morning Skies

[fiery_morning]

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[Infinity-Nevermore]

Wow. Those are so good! I couldn't do poetry to save my life.  

[fiery_morning]

Thank you, I would have to add a poem I wrote in Grade 4 when I get home whee . It still remains as one of my favourites. That poem got a Highly Commended in a competition out of too many entries so I am proud of it. 4laugh

Things happen when people less expect it huh?  

[Infinity-Nevermore]

Always.  

[Red_World04]

i really like the second one ^^  

[fiery_morning]

3nodding

Thanks 4laugh  

[Infinity-Nevermore]

Most of your potential edits are in the right direction. I would like to know why, then of all times, Andrea was crying about her diary and why she couldn't move. Also, who was that woman?  

[fiery_morning]

She was afraid of the man, not of the diary if that is what you mean? They are young children and they would've been too afraid to move.

The woman was the ghost of a dead person who was the victim of the man/chest/curse. Ghosts, I believe, still wander around if they are looking for something to be done or found. Would you like me to add more bits and make it a proper story?  

[Infinity-Nevermore]

Okay. I'd like you to make it a story.