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 Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 12:09 pm
This is a sketch a made today, can you guys please give some comments about it? What to do with her arms, they look a little weird, dont they? Ill prolly ink it, so ill also make changes, if sumone wanna help me a little about how to get it to look good.. 
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Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 12:12 pm
and yeh, im awared about that her skirt is starting really high up on her body and that its really short, but does it look that bad? cus its ment to be a short skirt so that u can see her legs u kno... stare
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Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 2:01 pm
Well in my opinion, i think her waist simply look akward. it's a little too large, not defined enough. let it coplement her bust area. as for the skirt, i think you should just make it come a tad lower on her thighs, make it look more natural. as for her arms, they're a little too long, they should end up middle thigh. try to get her V neck higher on her shoulders and lower on her breasts, otherwise it just looks like a pice of cloth that was dropped there. maybe you can try to get a little shading going on on her shirt, like to show the outline of her breasts. the belt-like thing on her waist should be brought down to her hips because it doesn't give opertunity to her curves to show and she would look too fat, which is disproportionate to her face which is thin and defined. I would put a different kind of pantyhose or none because it makes her look old while trying to look young...but that's what i think. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 1:17 am
xD aah, thx alot for the comments! finally sumone who said sumthin...Ill fix those stuff tha u pointed out, thx alot again! biggrin
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 12:20 pm
no problem! ^ ^ i'm a natural hard critic and I love it. :3 My brother says that it helps him a lot. btw, might I suggest you re-do it and then compare them later so you can see where you go wrong? that's what I like to do. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon May 01, 2006 7:00 pm
For one make your scanner work, the pictures too dark ^.^;;
Critque
The face is fine in my opinion, top of her head is a little bit weird.
The arms are a tad too long, advice look in the mirror to see the length of the arms in that pose....
Her body looks a little bit scunched up, try making it longer and more delicate, because by the way this picture is drawn, she seems like she is a delicate young woman in a dress....I presume Im right ne?
Try makign her more three dimensional, not everything needs to be shaded.
Hands look a bit funky and feet are uneven...
Compliments
I love the style that you used for this, the hair and face ore beautoful, as well as the outfit design.
May I ask what inspired you to draw this? I am guessing it's gothic lolita right? either that or very dressy? sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue May 02, 2006 12:05 pm
I think what everyone else said is pretty much right. The only thing I would add is that her knees are a little too far up her legs for their length. If you elongate her torso & skirt a bit, her knees would end up at the midpoint of her legs.....
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Posted: Fri May 05, 2006 2:37 pm
In general elboes are level with the bellybutton, and the hand is level with the middle of the thiegh when the arm is at ones side. That and the distance from the hip joint to the knee should be about the same as the knee to the bottom of the heel.
The neck and torso make each other seem wrong. Remember that the neck starts at the base of te skull, not the bottom of the chin. If you make up the distance by streching the torso vertically, you will solve two slight misproportions that make each other worse.
One of the things that makes the proportions look off is that from the ankles to the top of her head, we are looking straight at her, but we are also looking at the tops of her feet. A slight angle is good, but that much messes with what we think we are seeing.
Beside that are things like the shoulders not being level and the outfit should behave like cloth. I half agree with Bineko on the neckline. It should be farther in on the shoulders, but anyfarther down, and the blouse would be like a bustia (I know I spelled it wrong.) with sleeves and a skirt. I think the skirt should hang a bit more. It seems to float like gravity doesn't affect it.
I say it's a good starting point, but that the big deal is making the body proportional with itself. The outfit will follow automatically.
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Posted: Mon May 08, 2006 2:46 am
^^thx alot for the comments, i really wanna remake it and ill do it as soon as i get some time for it (right now im so so so busy with alot). heart
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