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 Posted: Sat Apr 22, 2006 9:16 am
Hi guys, I just had an idea thanks to a friend of the guild...
Anyone who wants to post there fanfictions of Elfen Lied stuff than post them here. Just remember the rules still apply...but have fun mrgreen *Jumps over cliff.*
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 1:33 pm
((Okay heres my fanfiction...Of a future Elfen Lied...))
Diclonious Prince...pt. 1
Vahn meets Luna
Vahn who was one of the few Diclonious male, but the difference between him and them was that he was born from Lucy and Kouta...though hes never seen his parents ever...
Vahn was walking over a short bridge it was raining, he looked over at a young girl about his age (10) standing on the edge of the bridge's side staring down at the water below. Vahn continued staring, than Vahn saw that she closed her eyes and leaned forward as she was falling, from the impact below she wouldn't survive.
Vahn ran forward and grabbed her hand just in time with his vectors. He brought her up and into his arms, as he sat down with her. He stared at her, and than realized the wind and sudden rush had blown his hat off...it was too late. The girl had already opened her eyes and stared up at Vahn, for a long while they stared into eachother's eyes, Vahn realized he was still holding her and than he let her go as she stood up on her own. Vahn stood up as well, they continued staring at each other...
"You...saved me?" Asked Luna...
"I didn't mean to." Said Vahn as he looked away, he pulled his bag back on and the Lilium music box fell out of it. It opened and started playing the melody of Lilium...
(To be continued...)
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 2:34 pm
Pt. 2
"Hey...maybe we should get out of the rain." Said Vahn. He started walking picking up the lilium box with him, Luna followed behind him...
Vahn and Luna sat under a hollow tree, he placed the Lilium box between them as it played the melody...
"Hey I'm Luna...whats your name?"
".......I...don't know." Said Vahn as he looked down at his hands...
"Oh, okay than." Said Luna. Vahn glanced at her for a second and noticed she was staring at his horns. He put both hands on his horns...
"What are you staring at?! Do these things growing from my head scare you so much?!" Said Vahn crossly...
Why am I the only one like this?! Thought Vahn angrilly, he had actually stretched out a vector toward her but than he felt something lie on his shoulder. He looked over and saw that she was leaning on his shoulder...
"Its not that...I just think there cute." Said Luna. Vahn's eyes widened, he retracted his vector. And stared at her, than he backed away when he realized again that she was leaning on him...
"W-What are you doing?" Said Vahn worriedly...
"Your shaking, I can tell your cold. So I just wanted to warm you up." Said Luna...
"I-I'm fine." Said Vahn blushing a little, he looked down at the Lilium box as the melody stopped...the rain had stopped as well...
"Well I think we should go now." Said Vahn taking his stuff with him, Luna grabbed onto his sleeve.
"Wait...are you...are you going to be here tommorow...if you are than lets meet up here." Said Luna. Vahn looked at her and nodded...
"Great...well, see-ya." Said Luna as she stood up. "Oh wait. Can I borrow this?" Asked Luna pointing to the Lilium music box.
"Okay, but bring it back okay." Said Vahn.
"Thank you!" Said Luna, she hugged him and ran home. Vahn smiled at her. Than he heard footsteps, he hid behind a tree. Two cops were comming by...
"Hey...you here about that brutal murder?"
"You mean the one at the orphanage?"
"Yah that one, why are we looking for a lost kid, shouldn't we be looking for the killer?"
"Well orders are orders."
Vahn thought they were going to come near him, he prepared a vector to attack just in case...
"I say we should return to HQ."
"Yah...besides I got stuff to do."
The two cops turned around and started leaving. Vahn sighed in relief and than he stood up and started running away...
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 7:03 pm
Pt. 3
Vahn had already run far. He stopped infront of a house. People were inside laughing, and being happy...it made Vahn made that while they were happy he wasn't. He walked into the house...and than slaughtered the family...
"Humans...are so annoying." Said Vahn to himself...
~A day later~
Vahn was at the place where he and Luna were supposed to meet, but she had still not shown up. He wondered if she would show up...
When he was about to leave, he heard footsteps and Luna was comming down the path toward him...
"Hi." Said Luna beaming at Vahn. Vahn smiled at her. They sat down and stared at the sky...
"By the way...I wanted to ask you something?" Said Luna. Vahn looked at her... "I'm moving tommorow, so I came to say goodbye." Said Luna sadly. Vahn looked down at the ground, he didn't say anything. "So I was wondering...if we could spend the day together." Said Luna. Vahn looked at her.
"Well...sure I guess." Said Vahn. Luna grabbed his wrist and took him with her down the hill...
"Hey where are we going?" Asked Vahn...
"Somewhere fun." Said Luna smiling at Vahn...
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:37 am
pt. 4
Luna took Vahn on an empty bus to somewhere Vahn did not know. But she said it would be somewhere fun so, Vahn didn't complain...
Vahn stared at Luna, Luna looked back at him.
"What?" Asked Luna. Vahn looked away...
"Nothing." Said Vahn.
~A few minutes later~
The bus stopped, Vahn got off with Luna. Luna took his hand and led him somewhere. Vahn looked up at a giant hill, he wondered what she was planning. She led him at the top of the hill...
"Look." Said Luna pointing forward. Vahn looked at what she was pointing at; It was giant festival being set up. Vahn looked down with interest...
"We're going there tommorow, before we leave. If you want to come I'll meet you there. For a goodbye." Said Luna she smiled, Vahn smiled as well...
"Wait...theres somewhere...I want to go." Said Vahn, he started walking down the hill. Luna followed...
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:46 am
Pt. 5
After some walking, Vahn stopped at an ancient area, shrines were along the hill, Vahn started walking up the steps. Luna followed him close behind...
"It'll be here soon." Said Vahn...
"What will?" Asked Luna curiously.
"You'll see." Said Vahn, he stopped at a spot where a few cherry blossum trees were. "Here." Said Vahn, he stood there and closed his eyes. Luna wondered what he was thinking about. Suddenly a large gust of wind flowed by and the trees swayed as the leaves flew around the area, it was pretty...
"Wow!" Said Luna amazed. Vahn opened his eyes and stared at her, he looked around, it was amazing the way the leaves flowed. Luna blushed at him, than turned away...
"Well...I got something to show you now." Said Luna, she took his hand and led him somewhere...
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 2:28 pm
Pt. 6
Luna led Vahn to a zoo. (Sorry I couldn't think of anything else XP)
Vahn looked around with awe and interest. Luna led him to the petting zoo, Vahn pointed at the goat...
"Look this one has horns comming from it's head!" Said Vahn enthusiastically, as he ran up and pat the goat. He looked back at Luna and smiled...
Than he looked past the goat. To the elphants...
"Look!" Said Vahn pointing to the elephant he ran up to the cage...
"This one has horns to, only its comming from under the nose!" Said Vahn entuhisastically. The elephant spat out water from it's trunk...
"Wow!" Said Vahn, he smiled, than he looked back at Luna...
They started walking around again...
"Its not like I'm happy, I was just...startled." Said Vahn, than he saw the kangaroo's pen. He ran up to it with anime like speed...
"Wow look at it's feet, and it has a pouch on it's stomach. Its so cool!" Said Vahn. Luna smiled at Vahn...
They stopped for ice-cream at the zoo. Vahn gave Luna her ice-cream and sat down with his own...
"Hey have you ever eaten ice-cream before?" Asked Vahn...
"Of course I have...but not in a cone like this?" Said Luna. Vahn smiled...
"Its basically the same thing only you don't have anything to hold the ice cream with." Said Vahn as he ate his own ice-cream too fast... "But brain-freezing can also occur...more in cones than the cups." Said Vahn as he ignored the brain freezing, Luna gave a small laugh...
~1 minute later~
"Well I'm going to throw these away, you wait here." Said Vahn. As he walked to the trash cans and threw the cones away. He stopped as he overheard a coversation between a couple...
"Hey did you ehar about that brutal murder last night?" Asked the man.
"You mean the one similar to the one at that orphange?" Said the women.
"Yah that one, the police still have no witnesses, evidence, or anything. To top it all off that kid is still missing." Said the man.
"Poor kid." Said the women. Vahn turned away and bit his thumb...
Damn, if anyone finds out I'm that missing kid they'll ask me about the murders, I'll have to kill more people to throw off the trail...Wait...what did I say?
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 2:51 pm
Pt. 7
Vahn was instantly transported to the confines of his own mind...
'Why did I say kill? Why did I kill in the first place? Whats wrong with me?'
'There is nothing wrong with you. You just enjoy killing.' Said a voice somewhere in the darkness. Than suddenly there were severed body parts in front of him all around, people surrounded him...
'Stop it, I don't want to see any more.' Said Vahn.
'You must. You can never stop killing, its in your blood. You are a predator of humanity and they are the prey.' Said the voice now growing closer.
'No I'm not, I don't want to kill anyone.' Said Vahn shaking, he felt cold.
'Thats a lie! You enjoy killing, you love it, you hunger for it. Don't try and deny it.' Said two simalataneous voices and two bodies with bandaged faces except for one of the eyes walked behind him.
"STOP IT!" Said Vahn in the real world, he just realized Luna was right beside him...
"Hey, you okay?" Asked Luna worriedly...
"Y-Yah, I'm just...tired." Said Vahn.
"Well don't fall asleep the days fading and theres one more thing I want to show you." Said Luna, she took Vahn's hand and led him back to the bus...
Vahn sat in a seat next to Luna as the bus started leaving somewhere...
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 3:09 pm
Pt. 8
"Hey Luna...Can't I come with you, to where your moving?" Asked Vahn...
"....I wish you could...but I don't think you can." Said Luna.
"Oh okay than." Said Vahn sadly, Luna leaned her head on his shoulder...
"Don't be sad. Its not like we won't see each other ever again right?" Said Luna. Vahn said nothing, than he heard the voice in his head again...
'Oh well, look at that...shes leaving and you can't come...what if she already has someone she loves. Wouldn't that cause you more sorrow...do you need anymore sorrow?' Said the voice tauntingly. Vahn was once again transported to the confines of his mind...
'Why are you doing this?' Asked Vahn.
'Its not what I'm doing, its what I'm keeping you from doing...just like our mother.'
'Our mother?' Said Vahn looking around.
'Yes, I am the side you keep locked up. This world isn't meant for me. Love isn't meant for you either. You should kill her now.' Said the voice.
'No, I'd never do that!' Said Vahn angrilly.
'Are you so certain?' Said the voice laughingly...
Vahn was transported back to reality. He was pinning Luna down to the ground he had his hands on her throat. She was pleading him to stop. Vahn let go quickly...
"I'm sorry!" Said Vahn quickly. Luna coughed and stood up and sat back down on the seat.
"Its okay...you must have been dreaming or something?" Said Luna, clearing her throat once more.
"Luna...I want you...to make a promise me something." Said Vahn...
"What is it?" Asked Luna...
"If I...were to ever do something...really bad...I want you...to end my life, and don't hesitate." Said Vahn.
"Huh?" Said Luna.
~A few minutes later~
Vahn and Luna stood at the top of a stairwell where the sky and ocean could clearly be seen. A crowd of people were at the bottom of the stairway...
"Luna, why are we-"
"Shh...look up." Said Luna pointing to the sky. Vahn looked up and shooting stars were scorching across the skies. It was the most amazing thing either of them had ever seen...
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 3:21 pm
Pt. 9
It was already getting really late and the meteor shower had gone away. Vahn stared at Luna...
"Your going by train right?" Asked Vahn.
"Yah, why?" Asked Luna.
"Well I remembered the festival you told me about earlier, and I thought that I think I can meet you there." Said Vahn, he smiled...
"Really, wow thats great...okay than tommorow I'll meet you there!" Said Luna, she waved to Vahn and started walking down the steps. Vahn watched until she was out of sight...
He turned around and bumped into some thug like guys with weapons.
"Hey kid, its dangerous for you to be out so late. This should be fun." Said the thug leader. Vahn glared at them, he didn't know why but suddenly he used his vectors and killed them all in horrible ways, except for the one who had threatened Vahn, Vahn stepped on his torso which was the only thing still attached to his body other than the head...
"Are you having fun yet?" Mocked Vahn, he smiled darkly and used a vector to tear off the head and threw the body aside. He continued walking on his way...
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 4:35 pm
Pt. 10~Later the next day~ Vahn walked toward the festival. He decided that when he saw Risa he would tell her how he felt about her. As Vahn walked around the festival he made sure his hat was secured on his head. He turned a corner and saw Luna, only she was with someone else. A boy and she kissed him on the cheek...everything seemed to stop for Vahn. He just stood there in a daze unable to comprhened what had just happened... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L1DSdFUutoM(This fits the scene) Suddenly someone knocked Vahn over, and he was getting trampled though he wasn't aware of it. He was transported to the place inside his mind... 'Didn't I tell you? She never really loved you.' Said the voice.
'No...that can't be true.'
'If she really loved you why is she kissing another boy?'
'But I-I-I...It can't be true.' Said Vahn. He heard blood drip, he looked behind him. Someone who Vahn had killed before he met Luna was standing behind him without an arm...
'Hey your just a horned freak, nobody wants you here.' Vahn fell backwards, he stood up and than looked to his left. Someone was covering there face with hands...
'Baka...you trusted me, but you should know...humans always lie.' The face was revealed and the head was sliced clean off.
Vahn tried to run but when he turned around there was Luna, standing infront of him...
'Luna?' Said Vahn...
'Hey there, why are you still here. I thought I told you I didn't want you to come follow me.'
'Luna, why are you saying...I thought we were friends!'
'Friends?' Luna laughed loudly. 'You really thought I was friends with you. Theres no way I'd be friends with a horned freak like you.'
Vahn couldn't take anymore. Many people who Vahn had killed were all around him calling him names and throwing stuff at him...
'No more! Theres no one left I can trust! Not my mother, not Luna, not anyone ever again!' Shouted Vahn, he threw up. And was panting, suddenly he felt someone pat him on the back. He looked up and saw the same face bandadged person from before...
'I guess you know now...this worlds not meant for me to live in. But I'm a magician, I have a special power that can make it so.' The person extended there hand, and the bandages fell off revealing someone who looked almost exactly like Vahn only there hair was longer, and darker than his, the eyes were also darker. 'Lets go, and make this world a place where we can live.' Vahn had tears in his eyes...
'Goodbye Luna...I never got to say that I...loved you.' Said Vahn, he took his other self's hand, and his hat fell off. Suddenly a bright light engulfed them, Vahn stood up slowly. And he pulled up his hat, only he wasn't Vahn...well not exactly...he was influenced by his other side...Dark...He let his hat drop to the floor revealing the horns comming out from his head. Suddenly the 5 people around Vahn were suddenly torn apart. Vahn was splattered in blood... "I'll slaughter them all...I won't leave anyone alive." Said Vahn darkly. What Vahn didn't know is that Luna's younger sister was hiding and watching Vahn kill all those people...
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 4:56 pm
Pt. 11
~A little later~
Vahn had already caused a massive slaughter at the festival, just about everyone had evacuated and no one knew Vahn was the one who caused it.
Vahn looked down at Luna's family, amongst them was the boy who Risa kissed on the cheek, what Vahn didn't know is that the boy was her brother. Vahn stared down at them from a high fence with dark and emotionless eyes. If everyone called him a monster than thats what he would become, but first he'd have to erase his past...and everyone who knew him.
Though he would show mercy to Luna, he would spare none for her family...
~A little later~
Vahn was sitting in a seperate car. He was listening to what they were saying...
"So I guess he couldn't come after all." Said Luna sadly.
"Oh please sis, you know he can't come." Said Luna's little sister.
"Yah besides, you never got his name did you?" Asked the brother.
"So what?" Countered Luna.
"Besides I'm sure if he came he would have been killed like a lot of other people, that monster with horns would have got him." Said Luna's little sister.
"Horns? Thats a lie." Said Luna hostilly.
"Okay fine don't believe me. By the way you never gave him back his music box, and I think I'm gonna take it." Said Luna's little sister, as she took the music box from Luna's hand...
"Hey give that back, Leena!" Said Luna, as Leena started running down the car...closer to Vahn. She stopped in her tracks when she passed Vahn, and was staring at him with eyes of fear. She backed up and fell backwards while staring at Vahn. Luna caught her...
"Hey what happened? Did you slip?" Asked Luna. Vahn stood up from his seat, and stood there, his hair shadowed his face. Luna looked up at him and smiled...
"Hi, I'm glad I found you by the way I forgot to give this back." Said Luna she took the music box and started walking to Vahn, Leena held her back...
"No sister don't go!" Said Leena, Leena pushed her out the way... "Thats the monster, thats the monster I saw!" Said Leena frantically. Luna slapped her sister...
"Don't call him that! Now apologize, or else! I'll hate you forever!" Threatened Luna.
"No, Luna listen to me you have to-" She was cut off as her body from the waist down was cut off and she fell to the floor, blood spattered on Luna as she stood there eyes wide with shock...
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 5:41 pm
Pt. 12
Luna's brother walked over as he heard a noise, he stared wide eyed at the body of Leena, and Luna splattered in blood, Vahn stared at him than his body from his waist was also cut off. The father came over to see what was going on...
"Luna wh-" He stopped as his head was torn off and his body fell to the floor. Luna shook and held her sides and stared at the massacre around her. She looked to Vahn...
"It was you...you did this didn't you?!" Demanded Luna. Vahn's hair was still shadowing his face...
"I wanted to erase my past, they all called me a monster and if they want a monster than I'll show them what a real monster is!" Said Vahn coldly.
Luna stared at him with wide eyes, she began to cry...
"Why did you do this I thought you were my friend, I was your friend!" Said Luna, through tears...
Vahn was silent for a few moments... "Your a liar." Said Vahn emotionlessly. He brought himself up to full height and stared at Luna with Darkred/purpleish eyes, that held no warmth but cold and emotionless ones filled with murderous intent... "Do you want to know why I haven't killed you yet? Its because we were friends. Your the only person I'll leave alive...for now at least." Said Vahn, he turned around wiping the splattered blood off his face... "Before I forget" Vahn, the Lilium music box lifted from Leena's hands and went into Vahns... "its best you forget everything about me and find somewhere to hide...I can't stand to see you near me... when I cause the massacre about to happen." Said Vahn as he started walking...
Vahn heard footsteps behind him as Luna tackled him to the ground, tears streaming down her face and onto Vahns...
"Stop it! Just stop it! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! NO MORE KILLING!" Screamed Luna shaking Vahn while still screaming. Vahn saw Luna's immense sorrow and for a moment the other Vahn started to come back he felt an immense sadness inside that tears started to come out of his own eyes.
What have I done? Thought Vahn. Than he heard the voice in his head again... Destiny...It is a thing that must be followed, one can never go against their destiny.
He pushed Luna off with his vectors and tossed her forward. As Vahn stood up, he broke into a run and took the Lilium box with him...as a memento of the pain he caused the only person who truly cared for him...
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 3:07 pm
Pt. 13 (Ending)
The train was eventually stopped, a mile after it had left. In that time Luna had been traumatized and didn't remember anything, of Vahn or how her family died. As they were taking her into the ambulance, Vahn stood on a roof of a nearby building. The wind blew through his hair, he wiped away his own sorrow and than turned around facing the other ledge of the building. Was this the way people felt when someone close to them died? It was the first time Vahn had actually seen it.
But he was almost sure of one thing, love and caring get others killed. He never wanted to care for anyone ever again, either because he was was afraid they'd be hurt or because he didn't know what it truly meant.
Vahn stood at the other ledge of the roof, he jumped down from the ledge and landed on the ground, where he landed there were two handprints pressed into the ground.
Vahn wanted to find a place to go, though he knew there was no place for one like him...the son of the Diclonious queen...
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