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PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 3:15 am
Katsumi Daido
Maybe a bit of backstory?
A bit about the main character(s) that we're following?

Something needs to keep the main character's path just, something in his past, or his personality type.
And what connection does he have to the police force exactly? is he the new guy who wants to prove his sense of justice? (as the most likely to get the best writing) And what about whoever his partner is? Most police officers have a primary partner,
What about the rest of the police force? what are they doing about the Biomen that are running around causing crimes? They'd obviously want to try and solve the problem as well. Is that something that the higher ups know but aren't telling the rest? Is the police force investigative team part of the company and creating false information?

There's also questions about these Biomen. do they look human with inhuman ability? Are they human with inhuman ability and wear suits like say, the Bat, Spider, and the two Snakes from Kamen Rider The First?

Are they a mix? Would some be genetic alterations and look inhuman, some be cybernetic alterations and look human (or even robotic?)
Would there be a defining theme that the Biomen share? such as how most kamen rider kaijin are? How would we differentiate a Commander Bioman from a regular one?

ok for back story for the main character his dad/or brother/or sister (cause who says we have to follow the rules to a T) was a early member of the WRPF(stands for World Rider Police Force we can work on that latter) and we make like 2 or 3 years in the past when they are sent out on a mission to a jungle where the company just so happen to place they're first Bioman test but at this point in time the higher ups in the police don't know about the testing yet they just got a single from a small jungle village for help so they send a squad of riders to go and the dad/brother/sister is part of but at this point in time the company can't seem to limit the power of the bioman and it's to strong and destroying everything because they haven't work out how to keeps the human mind from going mad from the proses but to make the story a little shorter the dad or bother or sister dies and take the bioman with them and that makes it where the police force find nothing of the bioman but they find whats left of the squad they tell the rest of the family that they died and our main character makes a promise to become as strong as them one day so that no one has to go through what him and his family did so fast forward 2 or 3 years 18 or 19 birthday and he tries to join the police force.  
PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 12:40 pm
So an intro could be a short paragraph like.....
"Three years ago, my [family member] was one of the best in the [police force name]. S/He was sent on a distress mission, and never came back. The remains of the squad was returned, and the company that designed the suits was comissioned to design better and stronger suits for whatever this mysterious enemy was. I promised to make sure that doesn't happen to anyone else."
So then this could be a full page intro with the image being a group of the rider systems in the forest/jungle looking at some looming humanoid shadow.  

Katsumi Daido


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Angelic Knight

PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 5:44 pm
hmm?  
PostPosted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 2:15 pm
I just took what you said, and thought of an image that would match it. Something to keep things vague yet specific.

By keeping the initial Bioman shadowed, there's no specific explanation as to what they look like, which fits as our Hero doesn't know what they look like either, neither did the recovery team.  

Katsumi Daido


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 9:37 pm
I see  
PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2012 12:07 am
ok what to work on now.  

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Katsumi Daido

PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2012 4:55 pm
We ought to start storyboarding, and character designing.

Who are the important ones? whats their personality? what do they have to do with the main character(s)?

Or storyboarding, what's the first story plot going to be?  
PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 1:46 am
Katsumi Daido
We ought to start storyboarding, and character designing.

Who are the important ones? whats their personality? what do they have to do with the main character(s)?

Or storyboarding, what's the first story plot going to be?


good question, what to do what to do?  

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Katsumi Daido

PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 8:23 pm
We could start with his age, and work from there.
If he's new in the system then he could be like 23, that gives him a lot off room for people he might have met in college, or police training. How he got the job.

And then how does he get the connections that will be useful after the higher ups decide not to let him do what he wants?  
PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2012 8:53 pm
i see  

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Katsumi Daido

PostPosted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 11:48 am
There's a name, the name can be quite important, though not necessarily right away.
There's backstory. As I mentioned in the thread about what makes a kamen rider, backstory is a big thing, even if it's explained slowly through the series.  
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