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The only thing I'd suggest fixing up is the width of her lower legs. Way too thin! If she ever decided to stand up, her ankles would break in half. Poor, poor girl.

Aaaanyway. Everything else looks good to me. It's almost 12 and I'm getting sleepy, so maybe I'll be able to offer more helpful crits in the morning.

Well here are some visual aids to assist you. surprised

http://www.maria-sharapova.me.uk/graphics/gallery/maria_sharapova_incredible_legs.jpg

http://www.stockmodels.com/losangeles/women/dianak/composite/images/legs-smile.jpg

http://www.resortimages.com/images/legs.jpg

http://www.therafirm.com/images/legs3.jpg

http://www.pnt-team.fsnet.co.uk/aqti/other2.jpg

I don't know about you, but my lower legs are double the width of my arms. That may be just because my legs are kind of muscular, but still. I don't know if that's a good comparison to go by, but whatever. XD

I think that the thing that looks the most weird about it, is that her upper legs are a normal width (especially closer to her butt), but then they suddenly become very skinny at the knee, which you wouldn't see in a real human being. If she was scrawny all over, those skinny legs wouldn't look so out of place.

But rather than doing that, I suggest plumping up the calf area and it should all even out. Just lookit those pictures for reference. 3nodding

i suppose this all comes down the personal preferance...but if you wanted to change the angle of the tail as it protrudes from her back..that would be cool.

Considering that if she really had a tail, it'd be an extention of her spine and thus not capable of...well, doing that.


I think if it curved more naturally awat from the body, the effect would be a bit more graceful and balanced

her legs are too thin. Just a bit. The kind of thing I would only have noticed if someone pointed it out to me.

i'm not bothered by the thin ankles.
For reference's sake, it's a good thing maybe to bring it up...but there's alot of exaggeration in this drawing, so whatever.

and lots of artists draw things that wouldn't work in real life. just as long as you know you're doing it, it's fun to change reality.

Overall real nice....but ya need to up the shading for the most part. Also, you might need to toss some purples or dark blues into the red cloths dark zones to give em more contrast and help desaturate them a tad


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Ho hum..I thought she was going to be on a squinty ol' castle window ledge..I agree with ^ don't put in the all the straight lines and bright colours, she is a curvy lady with lovely curvy shaded bits- make it so!