Constructive Feed Back!

[roseankitty]

Alright, I have noticed that a lot of people want others to write something in which they can inprove on as far as art here in the War Hounds Art subforum!

So here is the deal...


Post your art here, and wait for people to post feed back on your art work!

Now this isn't a bash on the artist moment... this is a constructive, you could work on this, type of ordeal.

Things that might need to be pointed out:

Annatomy -how a figure is structured
Porportions -does everything look even like it should ie: Are the arms the same length, to long, to short... exc. exc.

Those are the two that I see most. Make sure, though, that you point out where those need to be aplied to, ie the face, the arms, the whole body.

A note to art posters: If you post your art, you are opening it up for comments! If you don't want people to point out fults in your art, do not post it!

Hopefully this will help many people -I know I will be posting some of my art in here for you all to let me know-


-spell check was not used, so if there are any errors, please pm me about it!-  

[roseankitty]

Alright!

First one to get it all going! Just finished this one. >3



-I know its scanky... but it was for a gaia person, paying me quite a bit for the picture.-  

[EmeraldThaiphoon]

roseankitty

Alright!

First one to get it all going! Just finished this one. >3



-I know its scanky... but it was for a gaia person, paying me quite a bit for the picture.-

~So I just screen shot your pic, drew a few lines and help guides and wrote some stuff("what could be improve" and "what could be maintained").
~I acutually have more things to say about it, but I felt that the rest of the info I did not typed would be to detailed. Unless you want to see more then send a pm.
~If you think its to harsh, then please do critiq my critiquing(but please be acurate[no "this is shity" with out a why] and would very apreaciate no harsh language).
~Ask If you do not understand something or just have any questions
~I look forward to your next drawing 3nodding  

[roseankitty]

EmeraldThaiphoon

roseankitty

Alright!

First one to get it all going! Just finished this one. >3

wink .
~I acutually have more things to say about it, but I felt that the rest of the info I did not typed would be to detailed. Unless you want to see more then send a pm.
~If you think its to harsh, then please do critiq my critiquing(but please be acurate[no "this is shity" with out a why] and would very apreaciate no harsh language).
~Ask If you do not understand something or just have any questions
~I look forward to your next drawing 3nodding " class="user_img" alt="User Image" />

omgeh! I have my little nit picker. >333 I love those people!

XDDD

I shall post a couple other to see if you can give me notes on them. >3 -but after dinneh. >3-  

[EmeraldThaiphoon]

kooly xd  

[roseankitty]

mkay, so I don't know if you do chibi's or not... but this one was done today. >3



My tablet desided to call a time out after I got most of the line done.. >.< The tail and part of the foot.claws on foot. were done by mouse, then all the coloring was also done by mouse. @.@


And then there is this one...



in which I tried more of a realistic aprotch... >><< >3  

[EmeraldThaiphoon]

sorry! this is my finals week, and I got to do my take home final and study. sweatdrop
But I'll try to critique it on thursday or the weekend.
but between my breaks I might squeeze time to type down my thoughts. and I might ask a question from time to time.
Thanks for the compliments(they really made my day)
blaugh  

[roseankitty]

EmeraldThaiphoon

sorry! this is my finals week, and I got to do my take home final and study. sweatdrop
But I'll try to critique it on thursday or the weekend.
but between my breaks I might squeeze time to type down my thoughts. and I might ask a question from time to time.
Thanks for the compliments(they really made my day)
blaugh

no issues at all!

I am out of school, so I have no rush for anything. >3 I cool with the wait. Good luck on the finals!~!  

[EmeraldThaiphoon]

Thanks for the patience and the good luck. 3nodding  

[roseankitty]

behe... >3 Here is another one for you!



-did in like 2 hours. XDDD-  

[roseankitty]

A very stupid Sketch I have done today. >3 If the person likes it, it shall be colored. @.@ Oh boh what a chore that will beh!

 

[roseankitty]

bshhhhhhh I love colors. >3333


 

[roseankitty]

baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah... >.< Such a pain!

I can't get it to look right!!?!?!?!??!?!








-_-
Something is up with it... and I can't figure it out!. T-T  

[roseankitty]

bah... gave up.. >.< To many hastles with the hands... sweatdrop




But I still like it. >333