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PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 7:38 pm


Chapter One: The Demon's Cursed Birth


The doctors scattered everywhere getting ready for the first born child of the demon lord of dreams. It was a happy day for everyone, a demon and a water elemental where about to have a child. The war between the two races would be ended by this birth. But just as things where looking great, something was bound to go wrong. As Zack, the prince of the dream demons took his first breath, Ruby, the princess of the water elementals took her last breath. On this day Zack was branded a child of war and death, the elementals where insulted that the demons let their princess die. They believed that the demons did not try their hardest and that they where more worried about the baby. The demons denied this however and said that they did everything in their power to save her. The war that was supposed to end only got larger. Morpheus, the demon lord of dreams, was furious because he lost his beloved wife, a war that he tried to prevent only got worse, and he was cursed with the cause of all this. So he gave the cause a name that in their native language literally meant "Death child". He named him Zackary, "Zack" meant death, and "ary" meant child.

To be continued ....
PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 8:40 pm


Chapter Two: The Demon Lord Snaps


After ten years of not going near Zack, things where going pretty good. The demons won the war and the elementals surrendered, Morpheus obtained many slaves and Zack turned out to be a mute. Morpheus forced Zack to stay hidden away in his own room and Morpheus did not care what Zack was doing in there. Little did Morpheus know, Zack actually took on his mothers powers and became the very first water demon. Zack practiced his powers every day until he would pass out, at first all he could do was make himself into a puddle for five seconds. He was very happy with himself and his accomplishments, and was more then happy to show off what he could do to the one elemental man named Hephaestus. Hephaestus snuck into Zack's room every day to watch him try and master his powers on his own. Eventualy on Zack's 20th birthday he spoke to Hephaestus "Who am I?" Hephaestus was absolutely shocked at the boy's sudden question. All this time he thought Zack was incapable of speech, but then he came up with a question like that! Hephaestus smiled at Zack and told him "You are the only son of a beautiful princess and a horrible king. Your mom, the princess of the water elementals, had the very same powers as you. She was a wonderful woman who died to give you life." Zack was absolutely amazed by the story that was being told. Every day after that the servant came back and told Zack of his parents and of everything else that actually happened outside his room. But one day the servant was caught sneaking into Zack's room. Zack was 30 years old now but he looked and acted as a twelve year old human child. The servant that was visiting him was brought to his room by Morpheus and three guards. They forced Zack to watch as they beat and tortured Hephaestus until he told them every thing that was going on with Zack. They then forced him to beg for death, and once they cracked the water elemental servant and he begged for death, Morpheus forced Zack to kill the only friend he knew. Morpheus laughed as he said loudly "Now do you see why I named him death child?" The guards all laughed and one by one they all left the room until it was just Morpheus and Zack left in the room. Morpheus roughly picked Zack up and said "If you like company so much then I will personally vist you twice each day, once at lunch so that I can beat you right after I have eaten, and again in your dreams so that I can beat you in the only place you can't avoid." He dropped Zack to the ground and briskly walked away. Once everyone was gone Zack crawled over to the dead body of Hephaestus and forced the large, limp arm over his shoulders as he curled up against the body and cried.

To be continued ....

((*Sniff* It was a lot of fun to write this chapter ... but it was just so sad! *Starts crying*))

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PostPosted: Sun May 09, 2010 7:36 pm


Chapter Two: Thoughts of Death


Just as Morpheous had promised, he visited Zack every day at lunch and every time went to sleep for the night. Durring the lunch hour visits Morpheous would bring a dog so that it could tire Zack out by chasing him around the room. After the dog would catch Zack, Morpheous let the dog maul him and nearly kill him before he would take the dog off of Zack. Durring the dream visits Morpheous would torture Zack in un-speakable ways. One day when Zack was 50 years old, he looked as though he was a fifteen year old human teen, and at that point he no longer ran from the dog. Instead he killed the dog and threw the dead dog at Morpheous. Morpheous was furious that Zack killed his hound and began to beat Zack with his fists. Many years of this passed until Zack was able to stand up to his father at age 312, he looked like a 16 year old human teen now and was only getting stronger as he fought with his father. Getting even more frustrated that his own son was able to hurt him, he started to use a metal baseball bat. Zack was unarmed evety time and no longer stood a chance against his father and do he gave up. After several more years of beatings Zack had grown fed up with it. He found the bones of Hephaestus and broke off the sharpest bone he could and stabbed himself in the stomach, but he did not die even though the bone was right through him. He began to wander why he did not die, then he realised that no matter how hard his dad beat him he had no scaring, he then noticed that the bones of Hephaestus should have disintegrated by now. It was then he knew that his servants, that had the capability to do so, had set up a healing barrier that was keeping him alive. Zack roared in anger and broke down his door for the first time in his life. And for th first time in 251 years he was free. He ran as far and fast as he could, but he was caught by the chefs as he tried to get through the kitchen. Zack finally was free, but he did not know how to get out, and he lost his freedom just as quickly as he got it. He was brought to his very unhappy father and forced to his knees. Morpheous growled and said "What where you thinking? Did you honesty believe you could get away? What would you do if you did get away? You have no where to go! No one wants you! No one loves you! How would you survive?" Morpheous laughed as he watched tears drop from Zack's eyes. He called to his servants "Take that piece of trash to the prison so that he knows how good he had it!" The servents bowed to their master and took Zack to the prison. Zack was forced to stay there and every day he was administered beatings, and he had much less room, no bed, less food, he had no toilet, and if his clothes ripped he was not given new ones. At the age of 300 he was treated worse then an animal, his prison was never cleaned and his father still tormented his dreams. Zack just wanted to die but he could not find a way to kill himself, he stopped talking and screaming during his beatings and the only time he said anything was when he was by himself. He would say things such as "Kill me please, just kill me now." , "I wonder if I can suffocate myself with my s**t." , "I'll never get away from... him." and "I want to die."

to be continued ...
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