Avi Art

[laurent de vere]

This was actually done a month or four ago... so I'm more or less just kinda posting to post; I haven't done any avatar art requests in a WHILE... I think I'll do some vectoring later on for it. ouo

I like to think I got a little tiny bit better, too.


creative comments on things other than the hands, his not-so-round jug, and chin because I notice them too much? 8D

 

[roseankitty]

Alright, I will start then. >333333

-mind you I am a drawer not a speller... >.<-


It is a well constructed piece of art! I do find a few issues here and there, but first lets work on the postitives!

` lovely coloration
` all the highlights/shadows agree with each other
` love the facial expression
` the jug/hands/face don't look as bad as I think you are making them seem >3
` Wounderful display of the ghosts!
` Shape/style of the cape works well with how you added in the ghost pictures in the background

Alright, the issues I personally have with it...

` The gogles, they seem to sit oddly on his head, and the right one would be bigger as it is closer, and you have the left one larger. >.< Perspective issue there.
` Although you said not to add comments, I am going to any ways. >3 The face, I think the issue you are having is that his jaw line is all one line, perhaps a small slant as it goes up to the ear would of fixed your issue with that. The jug doesn't look that bad, its just that your circles/ovals don't match up in the directions. The top looks like it is sitting down flat, while you can see the bottom. The cork on it is agreeing with the base though, so just allignment issues there. And the hands, the one on our right isn't bad at all! Its actually an excilent hand, but the one on our left could be fixed up a bit with how it simbolizes him holding the handle of the jug.
` Another thing that I noticed is the anklet and bracelet look as if they are on the same level of the fabric around them -more so the left side of the anklet then the bracelet- and with the lips on the jewelry it shouldn't be flat like that.


Mkay.. now that I have ripped your picture appart to analize it.. >.< I do hope I have helped you. >3 possible we can do an art trade one of these days. XDDDD

Oh and job well done on making it look really masculine. >3 -i has issues with that-  

[Dismal_day]

x_Lord_Of_Nightmares_x

This was actually done a month or four ago... so I'm more or less just kinda posting to post; I haven't done any avatar art requests in a WHILE... I think I'll do some vectoring later on for it. ouo

I like to think I got a little tiny bit better, too.


creative comments on things other than the hands, his not-so-round jug, and chin because I notice them too much? 8D

i like the colors the shades and the coat looks great cool  

[roseankitty]

Its a WIP currently... ^^;;;; Any feed back?


-fyi, this was done completely on the computer using a tablet and Photoshop CS4-  

[roseankitty]

aha... took a break from that one to create a simplistic head shot..



its for a contest... >.< Hopefully they like it. >3  

[roseankitty]

A WIP For the same contest... different avi.. >3




will finish asap. >3  

[Ithesus]

a mix of random avi doodles that i drew in study hall and other stuff :3 (sorry its a lot compared to the others ;^^ and sorry for the small/large size, i resized/cropped them, i hope it'll go to the new-re size soon smile




GWAA I HATE THE COLORING ON THE FACE ON THIS ONE crying
for my freinds birthday

RANDOM DOOODLES blaugh
 

[roseankitty]

eye patches are sexy. >3

And love the art hun~  

[roseankitty]

Aha!

I finished one WIP.. >3

 

[Dismal_day]

-Cotheldra-

a mix of random avi doodles that i drew in study hall and other stuff :3 (sorry its a lot compared to the others ;^^ and sorry for the small/large size, i resized/cropped them, i hope it'll go to the new-re size soon smile




GWAA I HATE THE COLORING ON THE FACE ON THIS ONE crying
for my freinds birthday

RANDOM DOOODLES blaugh

i like the eyes of the first one and the sketches
but i think you need to improve the eye position 3nodding  

[Wyscol]

I want to put my art on deviantart ,but they're bmp and they don't wanna load T-t
this is my art,I just made it
and the one I use in my sig (now I'm puting it)