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 Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 8:19 pm
I happen to be a bit of a poet so I figured lets try and write a poem about Invisible Children and see where it goes. Tell me what you think.
Hiding and running,
all to get away,
transparent as a window,
completely invisible,
running and running,
from all those chaotic,
where to go,
where to turn,
completely lost,
pondering about,
seeing someone,
one, two, three,
three people able to help,
I wonder,
a chance to learn
a chance to be safe,
a chance to survive,
a chance to live without fear,
is this it,
a new life,
becoming a student,
having an opinion,
in the open,
alive,
in a better life,
once and for all.
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 11:12 am
i have a very bad english so im sorry sweatdrop
but i know a song , its not dedicated to the Invisible Children but for the
forgotten ones. The name of the song is Forgotten Children by Tokio Hotel..
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Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 8:44 pm
Sometimes the best poems are direct, and I like this one a lot.
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