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PostPosted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 9:09 pm


Author's notes: I'm not fully done and some chapters are short so bare with me ok sweatdrop (plus im not the words greatest speller don"t criticize me please)

Chapter 1: The unseen (Forward)
Bullets flying from every direction, bodies on the floor from bullet wounds to major arties. I see my comrades shoot from trenches, I realize i can't move a muscle or let alone yell for help, then i realize and think to myself am i dead...

Chapter 2: The young years
01/17/1942 0650 hours
"Yes, Sir!" Said Soap. His name was "Soap" cause he could get out of any problem by slipping away unseen and unheard. Soap looked at me and smiled and walked over to me and said "hey, Sharpie." I got my name cause i slept during the wake up call and him and my other friends drew a mustache and a goatee on my face. "hey Soap whats the talk about?" I replied "battle plans, well pre-battle plans." He said, then I see Boomer, Rocket and, Diva together. Boomer and Rocket got their names cause on the "Gernaide and Rocket launcher Test which they passed with FLYING COLORS and Diva got his name cause he wanted to be a model no wait a "MALE" model. I said "Ooooo, iight." "Hey Boomer, Hey Rocket, Hey Diiiiiiva" Boomer and Rocket waved and nodded at me while Diva gave me a glared then said "Hey hows you're 'Stache and Goat, Sharpie?" I responded "As good as modeling it." Boomer, Soap and, Rocket "OOOOOOOOOOOOOH'ED" Diva

Chapter 3: Training 0737 hours
"Hurry up ladies, I move faster in quicksand then you sissies!!." Sargent yell to us "U.S. Soldiers." It's an honor to have made it this far without whining to my parents on the phone or in messages. "Run, Sharpie RUN!!!" Sarge yell to me. I realize i was far behind my group, soooo i sprinted and caught up to my group Soap and Rocket are laughing at me. "What Soap?" i asked Soap responded eagerly to me "you're the "Captain" of our group and you're daydreaming?" I replied "Soap..... you do it too ya know." "I know but not while in group in the coradoors, yes." Soap answered. Sarge blow the whistle "Time for the real Training." Sarge said smiling.

Chapter 4: Obstacle Course 0800 hours
We were 5 by 5, 25 men together in the course that the Corps made for us. It contains Barbed-Wire which we crawl under, then the rope wall, then we zip -line over mud, then we must shimmy along a rope with even more mud under us, then finally the leap of faith called the "BRIDGE" that had broken or missing planks of wood, the middle theres a gap thats 7 feet long. Sarge said "Ready, Soldiers?" we all mumbled and grunted to get it over with. "Go!" Sargent said then blow his whistle for us to go. finally it was my turn to go. I dove for the ground barely missing the barbed-wire I was army crawling forward to pass my first objective then i race over to the wall I re-repelled the wall then i grab the zip-line almost losing my grip on it at the end, then i hit the end hard but i was quick enough to grab the horizato rope and shimming my way to the end then i swing my body mostly my hips to give me some sideway motion i let go at the perfect time then i barely land on the planks for the "BRIDGE". I carefully walk over each and every planks and put pressure on them then i walked over to some more i put pressure on those *SNAP* my leg is dangling from 15 feet above ground level. i lifted my self up then check the rest of them then i walked back to the start of the "BRIDGE" then i ran sprinted at my fullest then jump i land on the other side barely making that 7 foot jump too then i ran to the exit jumped on a ground bag that reduce the damage my legs take but it still hurts though. Finally my training was FINISHED!

Chapter 5: The Visit
01/18/1942 0445 hours
"Hey Sharpie wake up HEY BUDDY wake up." Rocket said to me "What are we in trouble?" i asked "No, no, no, no it's 4:45 you got 15 minutes." Rocket said to me "**** you serious? GOD DAMMIT!" I said in a rush "Plus the "Admiral" is coming." Rocket added. I got up and ran to the showers washed my body and my hair, got myself dried off then got in my uniform put on my "FRUIT SALAD BADGE" then i grab my cap dust it off a bit and put it on and headed out with Rocket. Once i arrive in the "Conference Room" I went to my groups row which of course was Rocket, Boomer, Soap and Diva plus me "Sharpie." "Admiral Hawking's is here Araise." Sargent said in the microphone. everyone stood up "Sit, sit, sit." Admiral told us. everyone sat down. "As you know where in a war with Germany and we might be out numbered but for America's sake we don't need to be scared about their numbers." Admiral said "We need to come up with some finesse plans over it's over for America." Admiral said to all of us

Chapter 6: The battle Plans A,B and, C
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"Anyone got any plans for now?" Admiral asked I stood up and said "My follow comrades and I have some plans three in fact and we'll be honor if we did them even though two are near suicide and one involves me getting captured by the enemy. Sir." My group looks at me and Soap said "we'll only came up with two plans Sharpie" "It's nothing greater than a man fighting for his country ok tell me the first two." Admiral asked "Yes, Sir. Plan A is when me and Soap go behind enemy lines and Rocket and Boomer plus Diva draw attention to them selfs and we pick them off one by one, Sir Plan B is when all of us go straight in for a Atomic rush in or as you call it "AGGRO KILLING" then Plan C is when I let myself get capture and stay in the base and become one of them and feed them false information then has the guys on check with our radios everyday of every hour then we attack when their planning if i die by my comrades hands then so be it i did it for my country." My group is wide eyes and lock jawed the seem what they heard is not true but it came out of my mouth and I say nothing but the "TRUTH NOW" The Admiral nods at me and in the room I heard whispers says "Is he crazy" or "hes brave but stupid" and "I can't believe this idiot is gonna get capture and risk his life for America" but i ignored the comments and the Admiral said "Captain Bradley is it?" I reply with a "Yes, Sir." "Your are the braves out of everyone here i like your plans but i can't have you risk your life on the field but god means if you have to then so be it I can't under judge a man who will do anything for his country, Captain Bradley I give my FULL SUPPORT FOR IT." Adr. Hawking's said My Group stood up and Soap said "Sharpie I and the rest of your team will help you and support you by anything mean necessary, Sir." I can;t belive Soap said "Sir" to me.

Chapter 7-15 coming soon
PostPosted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 9:38 pm


I lovez your story

AliceInWonderlandxVC


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PostPosted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 11:10 pm


TL biggrin R. i'll go back and read it later, but not right now xp
PostPosted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 11:28 pm


Cool story! 3nodding
are you goin to write more??

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