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 Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 10:16 pm
...ok...the other thread is for songs that already exist...so...check it and tell me what you think...
"Time to Heal"
As we travel down life's winding road
We do the best we can
To deliver your mighty message throughout the land.
The farther along we go
It just gets so hard
It's leaving our bodies bruised and scared.
~chorus~
Give it time to heal (Bass echoes)
Don't let it hurt anymore
Please help us to feel (Bass echoes)
Just take away all the pain
Lord we pray
As we kneel
It's Time to Heal...
We share your story with our friends
But some of them just don't care.
We have to do our best
To get them there.
Some will try to hurt us
They just won't understand
That we're trying to help them reach the promise land.
~chorus~
Give it time to heal (Bass echoes)
Don't let it hurt anymore
Please help us to feel (Bass echoes)
Just take away all the pain
Lord we pray
As we kneel
It's Time to Heal...
~repeat chorus~
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Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2005 5:59 am
I like it, but what type of music is it? Would it be hard rock, lighter worshipibey, country, fast paced, slow paced? This way I would have a better grasp on how it will sound. I still like the message.
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Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2005 2:49 pm
..oh, yeah...
*wishes he had a mic so he could upload sound bytes stressed *
it's kinda slow, more worship-like...kinda like something CoC would sing...
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Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 6:18 am
Sweet, if you want a mic, I have one. Oh yeah, we live miles and miles apart, and I would never see that mic again. And it would take a while for it to reach you, if I knew where you lived. Prly cost a lot to send it also.
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Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2005 1:18 am
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Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2005 8:31 pm
Thank you! I didn't realize it was that good.
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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2005 6:30 am
Addray Thank you! I didn't realize it was that good. Your welcome. It is very good.
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Posted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 7:35 pm
I like it! It reflects what every christian feels during tough times. lol, that's another one I want to hear.
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Posted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 10:12 pm
Yay...another one...man, I'm gonna have to put on a whole concert...
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Posted: Sat May 27, 2006 4:46 pm
Nice job. I want to hear it. *sigh*
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Posted: Sun May 28, 2006 8:10 pm
relientkfan5002 Nice job. I want to hear it. *sigh* Aye, but alas, I have no mic... crying
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 9:03 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:42 pm
Purified Ace relientkfan5002 Nice job. I want to hear it. *sigh* Aye, but alas, I have no mic... crying yeah that would make it difficult. *note that relientkfan5002 is me as well*
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 7:30 pm
Yes, good lyrics and yes I could give a more complete opinion if there was sound. ^_^
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