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It is gay right?
Very
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Interesting
66%
 66%  [ 2 ]
No way I like it. You should pick it back up.
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No. Your gay.
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Total Votes : 3


raukouruloki

PostPosted: Thu Nov 24, 2005 11:17 pm


This is the start of the First Scene of a Script I started about 8 years ago... And never picked it back up because I got bored with the idea of it. But It makes me happy. So I share.



FADE IN:

EXT. CENTRAL PARK - DAY - AUTUMN

Leaves cover the ground as REBECCA (22) in her trenchcoat walks alonside LIAM (23).

REBECCA
So, tell me this again?

LIAM
(offended)
No. I already told you twice.

REBECCA
I still don't understand.

LIAM
I spelled it out for you.

REBECCA
(pleading)
Liam...

LIAM
No.


REBECCA
(grabbing his arm)
I'll love you forever.

LIAM
You already do. So, no.

REBECCA
(letting go)
You're an a**.

LIAM
Apparently.

REBECCA
I can't believe she's leaving you.

LIAM
Hey, shut up.

CUT TO:

INT. STARBUCKS - LATER

Semi-busy. Rebecca is SIPPING from her cup sitting across from Liam who is smoking a cigarette.

REBECCA
I mean, it's been like what? Two years?

LIAM
Two and a half. But listen, I'm not crushed. I really don't care.

REBECCA
Yes, you do.

LIAM
(laughing)
No, I really don't. I'm glad to be rid of the sodding witch already. Puts a huge smile on my face.

Liam puts his cigarette out.

REBECCA
You don't mean that.

LIAM
(looks her dead in the eye)
Everyday. With ever-growing intensity.


REBECCA
So what now?

LIAM
Now?
(sighs)
Now, I go home. Finish my novel. Get it published. Live lavish off residuals - movies, merchandising, soundtracks, et cetera - and die married to a girl sixty years younger than me.

REBECCA
That would make you?

LIAM
Eighty. I think around there's a good enough time to kick. I mean, by then all the motor functions have pretty much clattered out years ago. The rest is just waiting. I can wait. I'll just think of it as a nap assisted by morphine.

REBECCA
You are such a hopeless loser.

LIAM
Please, like your life is so together. You're dating that jerk, Raoul. RA-OOOUUULLL. What kind of name is that? I feel like I should be watching some trashy gay reality show when I hear that.

REBECCA
I swear, you just like hearing yourself talk.

LIAM
Whatever. Are we still going tonight?

REBECCA
(blinks at him)
Yeah, ******** it. Happy birthday.

She downs her coffee.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2005 7:22 pm


: 3 Loki! keep going.
I wanna read more.

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