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 Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 11:52 am
Crying
I’m crying
You can see the tears
Running down my face
I don’t understand
It’s like this love
It can’t be erased
I’m drifting
Slowly through the sky
As an angel passes by
I don’t understand
Why can’t He
Be a helping hand
I’m afraid
I can’t look past the pain
It blinds me
I see only fire
I feel nothing
Just the emptiness
It’s sacred
The awareness
The fear
I feel alone
And yet you’re here
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 11:56 am
Dreaming
I dream of you by my side
And of you holding me through the night
I dream of you remembering
That I love you
I dream of playing in the sand
In the beach with my life floating by
I dream of swaying in a land
Where I get to see my uncle play tag
I dream of my future, past, and present
Of realizing I’m a mess-up and never forgetting it
I dream of the people I love
And how I lean on my life and their love
My dreams seem sweet and out of time
And keep me happy through the night
But dreams were never meant to come true
But made to make us feel happy until we come back to reality
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 11:58 am
Did you ever feel it?
Did you ever feel it?
It was right there in front of you
We had so much fun
Then somehow we collapsed
Did you ever feel it?
It was crumbling up right under your nose
Right out of the blue
I came up to you and said I'm leaving
Did you ever feel it?
It was my heart breaking
I found out
That life can't just be lonely
It can be destroyed and burned
Did you ever feel it?
We broke up and now I"m crying
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 11:59 am
If you didn't know
If you didn't know how bad it feels
Would you be able to see me
If you didn't know me
Would you still say that you love me
If you didn't know how to deal
Would you keep me guessing or would you tell me
If you didn't know what's wrong
Would you stay away
If you didn't know how to love
Would I still be with you
Or would I be sad that you didn't love me
If i didn't know what you've done to me
Would i have left
I guess I'll never know
It's all what ifs
Not ever what is
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 12:01 pm
Don't Look Back
It’s easy to look back
At what you’ve done
It’s easy to look back
And see what’s gone
It’s hard to look forward
And forget the past
It’s hard to look forward
To good times that will last
But through all the madness
All the pain and tears
Your family is there
To fight back the fears
Don’t look back
On the things you’re not learning
But always look forward
To things worth yearning
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 12:04 pm
for now, this is all you will get out of me plz comment
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Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 1:34 pm
good poems 3nodding I like how on the first one it has a little shape pattern to it.
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 7:30 am
annador good poems 3nodding I like how on the first one it has a little shape pattern to it. lol thanks?
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 12:45 pm
I just wrote this today after my break up with both my boyfriend and my best friend:
Alone
I feel alone
And unwanted
But never willing to forget
All the pain that I caused
And all the pain they forget
I am alone
And unwilling
To ever see this through
The pain is just as real
As the way I loved you
I seem alone
But only in appearance
Because, if I ever forget
The only thing left
Is my endurance
I feel alone
And unwanted
Because I can’t fight
All the pain inside me
Is all the pain in sight
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 1:03 pm
I feel sorry for you, that sounds like just about the worst day anyone can have.
But the poem is unexceptional. On the plus side, it's not exceptionally bad, either.
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 3:17 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 8:42 pm
You said cruel criticism. That's what I can manage.
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 7:11 am
The Goth Apple You said cruel criticism. That's what I can manage. I said it was accepted, not required. I'm just happy that you had the choice and you had nothing but good things to say.
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 7:02 pm
Frantic
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Open up my eyes; I wake
Getting ready, first step I take
Stiffened joints and heavy eyes
Sitting up; dogs' cries
Getting ready for my day
Stumble every which way
Franctically, I'm down the stairs
Not that anyone really cares
Glance at the clock, almost time
Open door, outside a chime.
On the bus; into school
In that world teachers rule
It seems to be a big buzz kill
While all time seems to still
Final bell, weekend's here
Rushing out I go back there
Where time runs fast and things are fun
Basketball and out to run
Time goes fast and bikes to flare
No hands! Not a scare
Back at home with games galore
Time still flies with not a chore
Dark out now, it's time to play
Outside we go to end our day
Ball in net and frisbee throw
Getting tired, time to go
Off to bed to sleep away
Awaiting 'morrow; brand new day.
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 7:04 pm
Pain
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It's pressure
It seals
It's pressure
It hurts
It's pressure
It claims
It's prassure
It's all around
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It's all around.
It kills.
It's all around.
It steals.
It's all around.
It destroys.
It's all around.
It's giant
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It's giant
It subdues
It's giant
It deludes
It's giant
It is strong
It's giant
I'm fragile
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I'm fragile
I call
I'm fragile
I end
I'm fragile
I shatter
I'm fragile
I'm subdued by pain.
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-Thaddeus J. S.
--November 23, 2008
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