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advice& opinions please..

what do you think

its crap D;

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hmm its alright,..

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its kool ;D

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Total Votes : 7

Niji Tears

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Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 6:11 pm

yeah well yesterday i was bored and started looking over my doodles
then i scanned one and edited it on photoshop
its the first one ive ever done..
can you guys give me feedback on what should be done better
&also any good tutorials for hair;;
coz my hairs fail D;

x

Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 6:13 pm

Awwwwwwwww its cute!!! 4laugh

Dagger1819
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tinyfreya

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Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 7:15 pm

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I can't be bothered typing, so I'll just do an image. :3
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Hope my redlining purplelining helped!

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Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 7:39 pm

I actually like the look of the elongated face and find the redo by tinyfreya too squished.
I think if you had just made the mouth and nose bigger/more predominate it would've balanced out a big better since the small-ness of it all does make it feel a little off.
The eyes are nice, but a little crooked. I'm sometimes a cheapskate and just copy then mirror basic sketches of eyes to make sure they're the same size if the drawing is a front view like this >_>;
Don't be afraid to turn on the grid to help you line up things if you need to. The feature is there for a reason ;D

The lack of eyebrows is a little distracting and might help make the forhead look a little less huge.

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By merely increasing the size of the mouth and nose and giving eyebrows it helps balance everything out without reducing the size of the elongated head.

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