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 Posted: Tue May 19, 2009 7:23 pm
Any ideas?  Keep her curvy? 
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Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 5:25 pm
-: The first one was a bit of a challenge for me. For the first one, the one laying down, I drawn her as she is using a giant, overstuffed pillow.
By the way the lady, behind the other, is laying I tried to make it look as she was using one of the arms to support her upper half. I really like the expression you gave her.
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I tried to keep her as curvy as I can but I think I messed up at the hips. Oops.
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These are suggestions and are you free to use them as you pleased. I do apologize for the lack of words. I"m feeling a little sick. However, feel free to ask any questions about anything. ^^ :-
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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 3:07 pm
First pic ... I think maybe top-girl's right shoulder area is a little too wide compared to the left. Also consider giving her left shoulder a little lift so it looks like she's leaning her weight on it. Love the facial expression!
Similarly, her arm draped across the first girl doesn't look exactly comfortable. Consider moving it down on bottom-girl's body a little further so that top-girl's forearm is more extended rather than squished against her torso -- definitely an uncomfy snuggling position. Either than or have her curve her arm around bottom-girl's waist towards her chest. (Although that depends on what sort of relationship these two have...)
Bottom-girl's torso is a bit too long -- just move her hip up and that should fix it.
Hope it helps! Just my two cents smile
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