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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 3:39 am
I'm not much of a poem writer, more of a story writer but I decided to try poetry again. I've tried poetry but I didn't think it was that good. Anyway it's a good thing my favorite game, Kingdom Hearts excisted or this poem may have never been written. Anyway comment, good or bad. Tell me how to fix my poem if I messed something up. Here's my poem!
Friends Forever
We are friends forever You will be there whenever I fall Wherever you are I’ll be there too If I call you’ll always answer I can show who I really am I can tell you all my problems I know in the end you’ll make me smile A while has past since we’ve been friends I depend on you, I spend all my time with you We are friends forever You see my true self There’s never a day I don’t want to spend with you You work yourself hard just to get a smile out of me We are friends forever
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