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Random Poll: Turtles Or Bananas?

Turtles

22%

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Bananas

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Both? O.o

22%

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Neither: Paperbags shall rule them all!!!! XD

50%

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Total Votes : 18

Black Hearted Shadow

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Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 1:13 pm

Here's my latest pic.
These two are my OCs Angel And Kume.
I've been working on the anatomy of my male and female bodies and I'm hoping I'm better than I used to be.
Anyway, I'm having some issues working with the folds on Angel (the girl's) outfit (mainly in the arms of her sweatshirt).
Any tips are welcome. ^^ And Red Lines are always loved. <3

Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 9:42 am

It's not bad, but I suggest maybe widening the hips on both of them

Sachisai

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Black Hearted Shadow

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Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 11:51 am

mm-kay I see what you mean. ^^ I shall fix.

Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 11:12 pm

I suggest that you either have angel's hood a little in her face of falling towards the back as it is now it reather distracts the eye from her face and also looks unrealistic however you did really well on the guy's hair and both of their hands. 3nodding

Un-Chien-1

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Miyu

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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:41 am

the arms need some working, but it's a nice picture. heart

Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 11:39 am

Angel's torso needs to be alittle thinner and longer, right now it's looking alittle stuffy. Kume's upper arms seem to be the right length, but from the elbow to the hand it's abit short, extend the arms maybe? Other then that great fold detail and excellent hands.

ZeldacatVampire

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Black Hearted Shadow

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Posted: Sun May 17, 2009 10:48 pm

OoO~! You're right! Didn't notice the arm thingy before! *scampers off to fix it.*

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