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| Counselor's Curse |
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25% |
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| Words Fail |
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0% |
[ 0 ] |
| I love them all! |
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25% |
[ 1 ] |
| GOLD! -steals- |
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 Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 8:35 pm
The Angel Inside
She could see
The hate in their eyes
The rumors of old, still alive
In her thoughts while she cries
Awake at night
She looks for hope
But all is lost
Nothing left to find
Because everything leads back to you
She's trying so hard to make it
To make it all work out
To make it all make sense
But nothing ever changes
Due to their expense
What she needs is to pass them bye
Transform into an angel and spread her wings
Never to return again.
Counselor's Curse
They say they know
How you feel
But they never been
Where you are today
They don't see your tears
They don't hear you cry
They don't understand what it's like
To live when you only want to die
They pretend to care
But they just want stuff from you
They ask for advice
Never realizing
That you're the one
Who needs the help
Woe to you, giver of advice
To those who don't listen
To your problems
And act as if their problems are above you
He gives advice
But noone thanks him
He gives thm hope
Still nothing in return
He shows them the way
And they get lost
He gives them peace
Instead, they push it away
He gives them love
And they show him hate
He tells them about
His own problems
But noone listens
Words Fail
Words fail to describe
The look in your eyes
Your voice is of an Angel
And your tongue is honey on my lips
It's like I'm falling in love with you
For the second time
Wrapped in your arms once more
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Copyright ©2009 Mike Schmidt
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Let me know what you all think. whee
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Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 4:42 pm
I liked the Angel poem the best, it reminded me of... a very dear character of mine.
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Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 8:31 pm
I liked them all. The alliteration was excellent.
C.W.M.
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Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 10:05 pm
Thank you for the kind replies. I wrote "angel" for myself. It was during the first time I thought about a -cough- personal -cough- transition of mine.
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Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 6:14 pm
Muffin Says:
Angel was definitely my favorite.
But I liked them all.
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Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 7:18 pm
Should I write some more then?
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Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 7:33 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 9:13 am
In that case I'll get right on it. heart
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