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 Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 12:16 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 12:20 pm
kira-fightingdreamer All instinct is lost, my motivation has drowned in this black sea of lies. I've locked my feelings up inside a heart criss-crossed with chains, the key I've taken and buried deep within an abandoned chamber of my mind and the shovel I've thrown out with the trailing essence of my soul.
Originally Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 1:58 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 12:21 pm
Kira-fightingdreamer On broken wings I'll fly toward dawn in search of scattered memories that will bring back your idea of hope which I've long forgotten within the shadow of my burning lies.
Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 2:00 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 12:22 pm
blah3251 Sorre asked me to post some of my poems on here... I guess I don't mind if feedback is given. Here is one, if you'd like to see anymore they're on my account in the journal section. Where is the Happy Ending? Fairy tales are a lie, So are all those stories. Putting in our heads, That happy endings do exist. I'm just a kid, so what do I know? The grown-ups always make believe we all have happy endings, But when we see that happy ending is never too sure. I've seen the hardships we go through in life, Some have it harder than others. Hey, maybe I'm a spoiled brat, Not seeing the good thinggs in life. To search for that happy ending though, It won't be an easy trip. We don't have fairy godmothers, Or a genie in a lamp. Maybe a curse or two to break, But not by true love's first kiss. Wish life was a breeze, Though where's the fun in that? It would be nice however, To have that happy ending. Fin
Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 9:43 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 12:25 pm
Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 10:21 am
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 12:26 pm
Oblivious Kim ~Kim's Poems~
*WARNING! Some poems are very dark and depressing!!!* Tele Poem: 226-4454
Some say
It's Weird
To write about Darkness
So if they do
They wouldn't know
Anything about
The Black Roses
Haiku(s):
 Pain and sorrow spread, Through the living and the dead, Mists of blood, Tears fall  Blossoms gently fall, Into the flowing river, that sparkles in light Glowing sun rises, over the field of flowers, surround by hills I'm sorry, but i had to remove the poem i made when i was seven because my friends want me to enter it into a contest so... i wasn't allowed to keep it up..... Free Rhyme Verse: ~I was depressed from a video i saw >.<~ You walk through the trees with a slight breeze You look up at the sky as clouds fly by They reveal the bright full moon and you think it's too soon As walking through the misty night air you feel nothing but despair All you have done is cried knowing your love has died..... ~Everyone knows this type ^^~
D.ark land
A.ir is thin
R.ed dyed moon
K.indling flames
N.ight sky
E.ver ending
S.ilent
S.till life
~NEW!!! Free Verse~ She sits by the river Staring as it sparkles in the light of the moon She hugs her knees to her chest As she thinks she's different from the rest She sits on the side of the river Her red eyes piercing the dawn
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 12:27 pm
My friend let your mind go far,
Reach out to the world beyond the first star.
A sanctuary of beasts larger than those you have ever known,
It is filled with dragons, some small and some grown.
A place where creativity and imagination can flow,
If it is you who they call, will you stay or will you go?
Madralyn, Sun Jun 15, 2008 4:59 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 12:29 pm
Oblivious Kim Stars of the Hills
Flowers of the Sky
Watch for the Dragon Clan
For they soon fly by
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 12:30 pm
Toritink03 Zon (My Daughter)
Remember the day you came home ?
I remember the day you were so shy
Remember the day you barked at every car that passed by?
I remember the day you made me smile
I can't believe that it's all over
Remember when you was'nt eating or drinking anything?
I remember the first day you were happy playing around
You got on my nerves sometimes but I still love you
But you brought joy into my heart
When ever you were in a big load of trouble I was always there to get you out
You always wanted to play
But I was always away
You gave me something special
Even though I know your an animal
You were like a daughter to me
Now that you have went to a better place
I can't look at your beautiful adorable face
I hope that he takes good care of you
Cause I know that I have tried
But there's no true way to prolong or defeat death is there?
Now that your gone I'll have no need to looking forward to your sweet licks or barks in the morning
All I will do for now is just reminence and mourn
I'll miss you Mamas I always will love you! sad Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 10:39 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 2:28 pm
I can hear a child crying to the wind
asking for forgiveness from her bloody sin.
She longs for snow-white angel wings to be drawn on her back
so she can lift her soul above her heart as it turns black.
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Kira-fightingdreamer Crew
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A_Wolf_Drowning_In_Blood Crew
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Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 6:27 pm
I once stood on a Mountain
I once stood Strong and Proud
I once stood on top of my Family
I once stood protecting them from all Harms
Now I lay
Still
Stone
Floor
In a Cave
Of Dark
Wet
Cold
I once ran
Through the Trees
My paws on springy Grass
I once swam in Rivers of Ice and Wet
I did all that, Yes, Until the Taillesses came
They were strange
In a Pack, like wolves
With them they carried weapons;
Long Claws that flew
And a Stick that contained what no Wolf could imagine
They had no Tails
No Fur
They stood High Up on their Hind Paws
They smelled of Demon
So I Ran
Their Stick beat me in speed
Now I lay
Still
Stone
Floor
In a Cave
Of Dark
Wet
Cold
The Bullet
It quieted my Howl
It quieted my Bark
It quieted my Whine
It Quieted my Speak
It quieted my Hope
The Bullet is my Enemy
The one Evil I failed to keep away
From my family
Now I lay
Still
Stone
Floor
In a Cave
Of Dark
Wet
Cold
The sticky Scarlet floods from my Wound
I am Dying
My Spirits are leaving
My eyes are dulling
My Life is disappearing
That Bullet
It ended my Life
It ended my Future
It ended my Hopes
My Dreams
It ended My Love
My Family
Now I lay
Still
Stone
Floor
In a Cave
Of Dark
Wet
Cold
I once was a Wolf
Standing Proud and Strong High on a Mountain top
I once was a Wolf
With a Family filled with Life
I once was a Wolf
Who could run freely with no Fear
I once was a Wolf
With swimming Paws against Currents
I once was a Wolf with no Established Justice
That's all I was?
No.
I could've been More
What a strong word, No, even for a Wolf
But now, I am No longer Wolf
I am No longer free
I am now a limp hump
Now that lays
Still
Stone
Floor
In a Cave
Of Dark
Wet
Cold
A Bullet did this
A Bullet
It did...
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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 2:18 pm
To live is to be loved
To live is to feel pain
To live is to protect
To live is to survive
To live is to be on the edge of death
To live is to be wise?
To be strong you must fear
To hate is to have once loved and been left
To survive is to learn
To learn you must listen
To listen someone had to once learn
To run is to be caught
To be hidden is to be caged
To be forgotten is to be free with chains that hold you back
To be watched is to taste freedom
To jump off the edge is to try to fly
To fly is to fall
To be caught is to feel safe
To be safe is unknown
To be watched every moment is to be trusted
To stand up is to be freed
To be free is only a blind fold over your eyes
To be 7 is to be a grown up
To be grown up is to work
To work is to forget what once was and to remember what really is
To learn of reality is to forget imagination’s sanctuary
To walk alone is to be followed
To be a leader is to take action
To act is to mark your self for death
To fight is to force you to hope
To hope is to stand up
To stand up is to stare down
To protect is to be a shield
To shield is to feel pain
To feel pain is to be weak?
To be weak is to be used
To be used is to be left
To be left is to be forgotten
To be saved is a new beginning
A new beginning is to fail
To fail is to learn
To learn is to make you stronger
To change is to become better
To become better is to know the worst
To know the worst you look upon your past
To look at past is to remember
To remember is to forget the now
To forget the now is to be lost
To be lost is to be alone
To be alone is to be followed
To be followed is to be found
To be cared about is unknown
To not know is to be scared
To be scared of the future is to lead you into a new adventure
To be you is to find yourself
To find yourself in this fake image you have created is difficult
Difficult is a challenge
To challenge is life, a challenge in itself
So give up trying to figure it out
Sit back and listen
Act when needed
Protect when wanted
Hope always
Live everyday without regrets for tomorrow more hurdles will come your way
Dear readers,
If you could help me the line in black needs some work and I would like feedback on my writing. It would be greatly appreciated for I haven’t written in a while so I am a little rusty.
Much love,
Izy
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 7:35 pm
Maybe you could work in something about being patient, at that part?
I'm not sure.. But isn't it true that to listen, you have to be patient enough to listen?
I read that whole thing though, long, but good!
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 10:52 pm
I'm new to this thread, but I thought I would share my latest poem, which I wrote about falling into a coma. I hope you like it ><
The Night
"And what perfect driving conditions we have tonight!"
I remember the fall, my ankles grabbed by the rose vines, dragging me into the carpet.
I remember the emptiness, my consciousness moving into a new home.
I remember the weights on my chest, detaining me from leaving the country.
I remember the noise, the unknown voices.
I remember nothing more.
I don't remember what was screening that night, which held you captive in the lounge.
I don't remember what drove you to come into my room.
I don't remember what you said. Did.
I don't remember the name of the operator, the drivers.
I don't remember how they tricked my heart into working again.
And I don't want to.
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bittersweet and evocative
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 9:55 pm
Me 2, new 2 guild n thread... would like 2 contribute my latest piece "Real". Hope u like it, enjoy.
-- Real --
I shoot for the stars...
I aimed but I missed
Skies the limit
I soar but hit ceiling every time
I reached the peak of the mountain
Got knock down again by
a fierce gust of wind
I swam the river wide
Halfway there, drowned
and headed back home
I have a will
Though all I see are dead ends
I once was a dreamer, achiever, and believer
but now I'm just being real
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