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 Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 5:17 pm
Hey, I'm an artist, illustrator, graphic designer, whatever you want to call me, but i feel that my work can use a total face lift. Can anyone help me out? 
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 5:19 pm
The first critic would be thisi image below.... i actually like this one but i know there are things wrong with it.... please help!!! 
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:22 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:33 pm
Nice work ummm, is there something wrong with his eye, one has color and the other is black. sweatdrop I'm not being mean or anything just curious.
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:36 pm
An accident as a child, its suppose to be a hazey blue but i'm still working on that idea, so i just left it black. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:39 pm
Oh, will there be some kind of story about this?
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:42 pm
Umm, i guess, never really thought about it. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 8:20 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 12:19 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:00 pm
they're not that bad... ahehe... adn I believe that you can still improve them ^_^
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Posted: Tue May 05, 2009 11:49 am
i think your first drawing , need a bit of work in the proportions , but i will say this i heart his facal expression , very nice ,
the one i really like is just the head , its got a lot of detail in it , and by adding the white to the goggles it gives the affect of the light hitting it , very very nicely done ,
i know im very critical but it will help , better than saying its all good biggrin
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