Constructive Criticism

[Pity_And_Fear]

I don't really know how to explain what I'm going for here, but I'm prolly just going to put in a new tektek each day so that I can get some criticism on all of them. Other than that, it's just like everyone else's topics. lol. Be gentle, I'm a newbie at this tektek thing. lol  

[Pity_And_Fear]

DAY 1
 

[Shiori601]

-vomits- i gotta go bye  

[Staring_At_The_Night_Sky]

Pity_And_Fear

DAY 1

Really simple and the hair definitely doesn't match.  

[call me C u p c a k e_12]

I honestly don't really like it. It's to simple, the green hair looks bad with it and I don't get wht there is a shiny thing on her chest. May i edit?  

[Rei-chan689]

It needs more detail. Add smaller items and layers to it and change the hair since it doesn't really match.

 

[Hikaruhia]

Shiori601

-vomits- i gotta go bye

First of all, I have to say that that was cruel T.T I bet your tekteks as a noob weren't that good either. Geez.  

[Hikaruhia]

Pity_And_Fear

DAY 1

Ok :3 First of all, the hair doesn't match at all. If you like the hair, then change the flower in her hair and the dress to a similar shade of green.
Also, the sword is a tad random... Just a tad though. I've seen several elegant warriors in my time, so it isn't too bad :3
Third, it's very simple. I have absolutely no complaints with simple, but try adding a little more detail? Just a few extra things that give the avi more spark. Like some accesories or a companion of some sort.
Tip: When looking for something good for you avi, try different variations of words. For instance: you won't get all the hits that have to do with fire if you type in fire. Look at those that fall under fire then type in things like flame or explosion or something like that :3

I hope this helps, XD. Feel free to PM me any time if you would like advice on some of your tekteks :3  

[Fellmaria]

Shiori601

-vomits- i gotta go bye

How about posting why you don't like it like everyone else, instead of being so rude. She stated in her first post that she's new to this.

Torako_Kameyo

Pity_And_Fear

DAY 1

Ok :3 First of all, the hair doesn't match at all. If you like the hair, then change the flower in her hair and the dress to a similar shade of green.
Also, the sword is a tad random... Just a tad though. I've seen several elegant warriors in my time, so it isn't too bad :3
Third, it's very simple. I have absolutely no complaints with simple, but try adding a little more detail? Just a few extra things that give the avi more spark. Like some accesories or a companion of some sort.

I agree. Matching and not using sets/ less then 7 items in an avi is key.

Torako and I both love to give feedback so just come to us if you need advice, suggestion, or examples. ; )