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Gunner [Finished]

Give me redline?

Sure

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Meh

66%

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Total Votes : 3

tricky_angel

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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 1:28 pm

This is my coloured version for a commission I received:

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My lasting problem is the dog that goes by his side, do I do jumping, snarling, front view, made smaller in perspective help!

I've left the sketchy lines in the picture just to give it a rawer feel XD

Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 12:18 pm

looks awesome!
the legs look a little huge, though
but he could just be really muscular, so only change that if you feel you must
because it still looks correct
the main thing that screams out at me to be fixed would be the fact that the dude is flying (or falling or jumping) and looks to be realatively high in mid air
but the dog beside him is calmly walking on the ground, making it seem like the dude is hovering inches above the ground with really low flying birds around him
maybe make the dog smaller really far below the man
or have the dog look like it's flying (or jumping or falling) beside the man
just so that both seem to be in the same context
it's looking really awesome, though!
The foreshortening on the man and the gun are extremely well done!

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