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 Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 11:08 am
So, i have this cool opening for a poem, but i don't no where to go from here. any suggestions???here it is...
Gnarled oaks and ancient Elms
warriors with emerald helms
so now wat do i do??? help!!!!
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 11:09 am
srry bout the poll, guys. redface id never done one before, so i had no idea wat i was doing. u'll just have to tell me if u like it.
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Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2008 10:10 am
Sound's like it would be a fantasy type poem. I'd love to help more but I can't really write poems to well. ^^00
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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 8:25 am
well, thanks for the tip, i'll keep that in mind!
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Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2008 6:12 am
I reckon it's a really good start to a poem biggrin
Well, the question would be, what would you like your poem's topic to be about? I agree it sounds like a fantasy poem, too.
So maybe your poem could be like either a narrative poem: of how the warriors try and protect their home and their feelings etc.
OR,
your poem could be describing a setting, yea? and thats just the beginning of it ^^
yeps, just thinking of how to help ya haha whee
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Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 8:27 pm
hey, thanx! thats an idea i had not yet considered! let me no if u guys come up with any thing else...
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