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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 10:13 am
Lost Memories
Hidden lullabies Crossed out words Star-struck lovers Skin bared souls
Far away moons Tombs of gold, Red like blood, Green-yellow sky
Food for the poor Deep orange crusts Time on a stand by Thorns of dull sharpness
Blue-green shadows Tall tale madness Tails of shreds Hats of razors
Told never to, Grow older than, Tell wiser like, Think faster as.
Undetermined fate, Grey cold cobblestones… With faces like fire, As a walking lead rope
A noose of death, Those sounds of pain, An originally killed man, Or… just his resurrection of memories
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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 10:14 am
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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 12:40 pm
love it...kind of sad but very vivid
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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 12:58 pm
Kita_of_Revenants love it...kind of sad but very vivid Yeah, it's like a lot of my poetry. Some around death and sadness, some around sadness, and others around other kinds of things in my mood at the time.
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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 1:38 pm
Talidestra Wolf Kita_of_Revenants love it...kind of sad but very vivid Yeah, it's like a lot of my poetry. Some around death and sadness, some around sadness, and others around other kinds of things in my mood at the time. lol yeah mine is all over the place
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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 1:51 pm
Kita_of_Revenants Talidestra Wolf Kita_of_Revenants love it...kind of sad but very vivid Yeah, it's like a lot of my poetry. Some around death and sadness, some around sadness, and others around other kinds of things in my mood at the time. lol yeah mine is all over the place Mine can be and can't be.
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Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 11:15 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 2:53 pm
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Black-Cat-Revenants Captain
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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 5:04 pm
very good Sis! I loved it!
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Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2008 6:06 pm
biggrin Thank you, brother.
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Rozen Black Chronicles Crew
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Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 6:52 pm
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