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 Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:48 am
Cowardice to Courage
I’ve pushed away my friends
Just because I was a coward.
I’ve let people use me
All because I couldn’t say no.
I let people get away
Because I feel I’ll fail.
I’m truly a coward.
Well no more, I’m not going to
Let people get away
Because I won’t fail
I won’t let people use me
Because I’m saying no.
I won’t push anymore friends away
Because I’m a coward
No more
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:54 am
I’ve listened
I’ve listened to everything
All of it seems wrong
I’m tired of listening to others
I’m tired of letting people into my life
I’m tired of caring.
Tired of crying in pain
No more
No more remembering
Get rid of desires
No more love
I’m done listening because
I’m not listening anymore
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:58 am
The Man
The man who truly was a kid
The man who would push you towards your goals
Tell the very end
The man who believed you could do anything you could do anything
As long as you put your heart to it
The man with the biggest smile
The man who loved his family more then anything
The man who truly was a cowboy
down to the roots of his hair.
The man everyone knew
And was glad to know
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Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 9:03 am
In love for My People
In love for my people who fight
For what they believe is right
In respect for my people. Who keep their promises.
Till the very end
In honor of my people
That stand up for all
In remorse for my people who lost
But still won’t give up.
In love, respect, honor, remorse for my people
The runners, writers, and protectors of the world
In remembrance of my people,
That’s why
I stand tall
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Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 8:03 am
some people say that the world is nice and fun don't believe the narcissistic lies of the people they brain wash you into thinking that the world is nice and kind but the truth is that the world is a bunch of bull don't agree with them rebel and fight the ones who tell you that they own you, You own your life not them take the teachings and embrace them for the hatred of them
By Nitro4444
Been there and went through it
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Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 9:37 am
I like these poems. They're very passionate. It's true that the world isn't all roses. (But that does not for one second mean it isn't beautiful) I like how you have a defiant tone, but still hold on to what is good. d^^b
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Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 8:41 am
sistersan I like these poems. They're very passionate. It's true that the world isn't all roses. (But that does not for one second mean it isn't beautiful) I like how you have a defiant tone, but still hold on to what is good. d^^b Everyone says that I am emo because of my poems they tell me that writeing poems turn u emo thats a lie poems are a way to express your feelings but yea I do make the world sound dark and horrible but thats what I like to write I accually got in trouble at school because I wrote a dark poem I was in rehab for 6 months for suicide prevention the school said that I might comite suicide because of my poem they are so stupid I don't write what I think is right or wrong I just write what I feel but hey thats me I hate school though because they tell u what is right and wrong let kids do what they want
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Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:08 pm
Writing style all depends on the writer. Some righters: Dark is good and light is bad and vice-versa. It all depends on the writer.
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