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ello pudding

PostPosted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 8:00 pm


its been three weeks since ive written any thing, well interesting that is.
useally they come from no ware, they just fall in to my lap, but lately ive been having to hunt for them. Pomes stories words, make awful game. as appose to being great full for the ones that come to me, naturally, peacefully, full of life and meaning like god and the English language had intended, i get greedy and lust for more. with pencil and rifle in hand, i take hast in choosing meaning and forcing rhyme shooting pomes down and catching them on paper, as if they were cats hit by cars with nothing that was kept inside left to hide they lye stuck to the road like tape, as rigimortuse permanently keeps a horrified disfigured look upon they’re faces. not how you want to remember fluffy, if fluffy would have come to me though...I want pace with words, and pomes- there just beings that come often but are caught seldom
PostPosted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 12:23 pm


Le gasps! eek A poll! mrgreen Oh, and hi, Ello Pudding. stare

Nice metaphors! I heart metaphors! 3nodding

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 31, 2008 11:58 am


Wow. Sounds like your just having a bit of muse flight, Pudding. Nothing that cannot be fixed with a bit of rest. Do not try to force it, unless it is needed. Let the stories come to you and like Scoot has said, you did a lovely job with your metaphors. 3nodding Even though they were a bit... sad.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 31, 2008 2:48 pm


Poetry rants are still poetry. 3nodding

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 01, 2008 6:00 pm


User ImageIndeed they are, Scoot. Indeed they are. blaugh
PostPosted: Sat May 31, 2008 4:07 pm


meh, I've got whole months that I don't write poems or stuff and then one evening I start to write entire pages full, I don't post em all here though razz

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:56 pm


I never post any of my writing because I'm super self conscious of my work. I have a hard time turning papers in to teachers too.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 4:58 pm


I haven't written any poetry in over a month or two... I can't remember. sweatdrop That's still better than say... artwork, where I haven't posted anything new since... about six months ago. Yikes.

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