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did you like the MCR story by Paralized_panda?
Yeah! Its was really good! I cant wait for more
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OHEMGEEHallo

PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 1:08 pm


********MUST READ THIS LAME THING**********
Hey there guys well yeah I was really bored and I decided to put my friends MCR fanfic on here! Her name is Paralized_panda and I really liked it! Now heres some crap about the story so you dont have any questions and stuff with it:
its around the time when MCR are doing Black Perade songs but gerards still a alcholic, there also playing around the vans warp tour time and there still friends with the used. Yeah....A bit starnge but bare with it. shes not finished the whole story yet and have only went to about 6 parts so far. So my friend will be updatin this lil baybee for your guys enjoyment. Oh and the story is also written out in script type of writing because my friend was friggan lazy. lol yeah alright done with my stupid rant.
ENJOY! (leave a comment too please?)


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 1:10 pm


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Part Five- The warp tour
Two days later....
The Warp tour grounds were crazy! There were bands everywhere! From small indie bands to the hottest bands that you would see at hot topic! Tour buses, trailers, vans, and cars were parked about everywhere since the parking lot was busting out of its limbs. The ground was very dusty and dirty with cigarette buds and soda cans sprawled around the place. Robyn loved it.
Robyn: This place is huge!
Gerard: heh yeah wait till you get to the stage area.
After the late coffee talk two nights ago Robyn and Gerard have been hanging out a lot.
Robyn: Ohmigod was that Adam from Taking back Sunday that just went into that potter potty?!
Whoa! Is that the Killers?! Oh oh wait Adams coming out of the jon! ADA- (About to call out to Adam and yell his name when somebody’s arm head locks Robyn. Robyn shrieks and flips the person.) It turns out to be Bert McCracken from The Used!
Bert: uggg....
Gerard: heh shouldn’t have done that Bert...
Robyn: Oh Gosh! Y-your Bert McCracken!
Bert: (Gets up holding his back) Uh yeah. Nice to meet you.
Robyn: Im so so sorry!
Bert: Its alright. I shouldn’t have snuck up on you...(looks at Gerard then back at Robyn) soo G-man is this your girlfriend?
Gee/Rob: NO! (Looks at each other)
Gerard: I-I mean she’s my friend.....but not a girl girl friend or anything...
Bert: (laughs) ok ok I get it! You and your girlFRIEND should have a drink with me sometime.
Gee/rob: Um....yeah sure...sometime. (Rob I don’t drink)
Bert: oops gotta go see you two love friends later. (Waves off and walks away)
Gerard: uhh just ignore him. He can get pretty annoying at times.
Robyn: Its ok...(they just stand there not knowing what to say)
Gerard: ok....well I gotta go....
Robyn: me too..... (both walk away rather quickly)

Later at night today Robyn walked into the tour bus where she found Ray and Bob playing donkey Kong bongo.
Robyn: Hey Where is Gerard?
Ray sad still staring hard at the screen) oh he’s drinking with Bert.
Robyn: Sits on the couch and sighs.
Bob: What’s wrong?
Robyn: Do you guys think Berts alright to hang out with Gerard?...When I met him I just had a uneasy feeling about him....
Ray: Im not sure Rob....Bert is a pretty difficult dude to hang with...
Bob: OH OH! (Is losing) NO NOOOO! (Bongs faster)
Ray: HA HA Im so kicking your a**!
Robyn: (rolls eyes) Boys. (Turns and looks out the tour bus window with a worried look) Gerard.......
End of part five- the Warp Tour


Part 6 the other side of Gerard

It was the third state that all the bands including MCR (and Robyn) went to during the Vans warp tour and Gerard has kept on coming in the tour bus late at night after drinking with Bert during the tour. This was making Robyn even more worried.
-At a MCR stage practice-
Gerard: ugh...Stop.....STOP!
The band stops playing with annoyed faces.
Frank: sighs* what is it this time Gerard?
Gerard: Our sound is all off!
Mikey: Dude we sound fine. Can you please stop complaining and get through the first song atlest?
Ray: Hes right man. We’ve been practicing for a hour on only Helena.
Gerard: I don’t care! Were going to do this song until its right. Now start again. *Gerard ordered gruffly*
Right then Robyn comes in with Starbucks and donuts.
Robyn: Hey guys! Brought some refreshments. Hows the practicing been going?
Frank: Its just dandy with Mr. Grinch over here barking orders at us. (Puts his guitar down and gets a coffee)
Gerard: WELL I WOULDN’T HAVE TO BE BARKING ORDERS AT YOU IF YOU WOULD JUST PLAY THE DAMN SONG RIGHT THE FIRST TIME. (Gerard yelled at frank through the microphone making it feedback with the sound screeching)
Frank: ( this made frank even more mad) WELL I’VE BEEN PRACTICING WHILE YOU WERE GETTING DRUNK EVERY NIGHT AND YOU DON’T SEE ME BEING A a**! (Frank jumped back on stage getting close up to Gerard’s face)
Gerard: You wanna try saying that again mutchkin? (He said through gritted teeth)
At that remark Frank lunges out at Gerard with great force making them both fall on the stage floor. They both are now fighting making the microphone fall over as Gerard and Frank both take a punch at each other
Robyn: HEY! STOP IT! (She and Ray try to pull Gerard off of frank as Mikey and Bob are trying to pull frank away from Gerard)
They finally get them both to sit down as Robyn looks at Gerard.
Robyn: Gerard, What the hell?! What is up with you lately?
Gerard: What is up with me? WHAT’S UP WITH ME?! This whole ******** band is what’s wrong with me! They keep on sitting on their asses all day long and are playing like s**t lately!
Robyn: Gerard stop saying crap like that, all you guys are friends-
Gerard: scoffs* like you know anything about us. Why don’t you stop being a b***h and-
Bob: Gerard shut up! (Bob speaks up tightening his grip on his pissed off friend)
Gerard: ******** off! (Gerard cuts Bob off with a threatening glare)
Robyn looks at Gerard and sees the bruises on his face from frank. His eyes were blood shot with bags under them and he looked paler than the make up he wore during concerts. He was defiantly drinking last night with Bert again. Rob has never seen him like this before and it kinda scared her a bit.
Robyn: Gerard...you gotta stop drinking so much lately. Its really doing something to you.
Gerard: so what if I’ve been getting drunk lately. Its my own business so you can just stay the hell out of it! (Gerard spits at Robyn)
All of a sudden, (SMACK) goes Robyn’s hand across his face. Surprised by the sudden action by Robyn Gerard just stares at Robyn while holding his hand to his badly bruised and pale face.
Robyn: Stop it! Just stop it! Look at what you’ve been doing to yourself! You have a ******** problem and its just hurting us more than its hurting you! Look at your friends Gerard, they’ve stuck by you this whole time with this and what do you do?! Get a ******** hangover in the morning then get drunk again with your little drinking buddy Bert! (Robyn is now close to tear as she’s screaming this to Gerard)
Gerard takes a glance at Robyn then at the rest of his band mates. Ray, bob, Mikey, and frank, are looking at Gerard with such a sad look like they really don’t know what’s going to happen to their friend anymore. To tell the truth Gerard didn’t even know who he was anymore. He just couldn’t stand seeing them give him that look right now especially Robyns who was now seeming like she was going to break down any moment.
Gerard: Im done for the day. (Gerard whispered as he slowly broke from bobs grasp and began to walk out of the practice room)
The door closes as the rest of MCR and Robyn are silently standing there not knowing what to do next but to look down at the floor.
End of part 6The other side of Gerard

OHEMGEEHallo


Gerard Way003 InThe Flesh

PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 3:57 pm


I love this! Can't wait for more! I would just be shocked if the mcr bus hit me...or if...Gerard's car hit me! That would be so awesome...wait...no it isn't...Is that good or bad?!
PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 6:59 pm


gerardway003intheflesh
I love this! Can't wait for more! I would just be shocked if the mcr bus hit me...or if...Gerard's car hit me! That would be so awesome...wait...no it isn't...Is that good or bad?!
haha yeah it would be pretty crazy. Thanks for liking it! I'll make part 7 soon! :]

Paralized_Panda


Bambi With Love

Angelic Hunter

PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 7:55 pm


People say my story is awesome! I want this one more then my own! Moreeezzz Pwease!?!
PostPosted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 11:12 pm


PART 7 IS AN APOLOGY ENOUGH?


Rachel: Holy crap you actually smacked Gerard?!
Robyn: ugh...yes. (Robyn replied sounding guilty. She was outside leaning against MCR's tour bus on the Warp tour grounds the next day talking to Rachel on her cell phone)
Rachel: Wow...I'd never thought I'd see this go down between you two. Well have you said anything back to him ever since the fight yesterday?
Robyn: No!...Im mean come on, what can I say after something like that?!
(after the whole fight that went down yesterday Gerard has been avoiding her, but its not like Robyn hasnt been avoiding him either. How could she face him again? Should she just come up say a quick sorry?....but wait...should she even say sorry?! Robyn was not only drunk in guilt but also confusion.)
Rachel: Well by one way or another, either him or you are bound to say something eventually. Have you talked to their manager about Gee's drinking problems?
Robyn: Yeah a bit but it seems like Bryan and all the other dudes are just shrugging it off their shoulders and not disscussing it. Its almost as if their afraid to tell him to stop or something.
Rachel Well if you tell me I think Berts trouble. Maybe you should try to have him hang less with bert and more with...well you.
Robyn:psh well by the looks of it I dont think gerards gonna want to hang out with anybody but bert right now...exspecially me.
Rachel ...crap my cell starting to break up....listen Rob Just try to talk to him. you never know whats gonna happen...(right then the cell phone is filled with the sounds of crackles which pretty much put a end with the call.)
Robyn Turns off her cell phone and sighs deeply. Putting her head up against the bus and closeing her eyes. It was a sunny day and the sun felt good against her face. finally after a few seconds of this she finally left the tour bus and began to make her way toward the stage. It was going to be time soon for the Warp tour bands to start playing and she needed to bodyguard........
It was now around noon and the stage area was soon packed with people.
Robyn took her usual place in the middle of the front stage. After a few bands played it was MCR's turn to go on stage. Robyns heart quickend as each member made there way to perform. Robyn kept her back from the stage not daring to look at Gerards face as he was only a feet away from her. The band started to play exploding with as much aggression,fierceness, and energy than the crowd was giving off. after a few songs Robyn finally dared her self to take a glance at the five men in back of her. It was amazing, almost shocking actually, how much all the guys were working together with the sound and beat! Gerard was jumping and moving around along with the crowd and frank was screaming and singing along with gerard with the same microphone. It was as if the whole fight never went down between the two...or any of the members at all! right then gerard caught eyes with the staring robyn and quickly looked and moved away to the other side of the stage. Robyns heart sank as she turned her head from the stage trying to pretend like nothing was wrong.

-after the show-
Robyn went up to Ray and the other three guys back stage as gerard was no where in sight.
Robyn:(turns to mikey) ...Hey do you know where gerard went off to?
Mikey: Um yeah I think he went to take a smoke or somthing outside near the Used's tour bus...(Mikey looks Robyn in the eyes) you going to try to apologize?
Robyn:(Robyn quickly looks down and starts to pick at her fingernails, a habit that she did when she was nervous) Well Kinda...Im mean...no....um... should I?
Mikey: Well if you ask me. no not at all...Ive been trying to tell him to apologize to you, but he wont do anything. Listen...just try to talk to gerard. Im sure he feels just as bad as you do right now. (he gives rob one of his sweet mikey smiles)
Robyn: (stops picking at her nails and smiles back) Alright. Ill talk to him...thanks Mikey, your a really nice guy you know that?
(Mikey blushes slighty at this remark)
Mikey: yeah I get said that a couple times a day. (he replies back jokingly)

Robyn is half way there to the used tour bus feeling a bit nervous about facing gerard again. What should she say to him? "Hey buddie ol gee, lets forget about the screaming, name calling, smaking, spitting, and fighting that happened about from yesterday and go watch some good old disney channel on the TV!!!" Yeah this was going to be a little more complecated than that.
robyn has just stopped walking to find Gerard smoking his cigarette with a coffee in the other hand as he looked off in the distance like he was deep in thought. The sun was starting to set and he looked even more handsome. Robyn gathered up her wimpy courage and walks up to
gerard and taps his shoulder. Gerard breaks from his thoughtful trance and turns around to see who it was.
Gerard: (Jumps a little to find out that its robyn standing before him.) R-Rob!....um...hey...um...um...( Gerard strains to find the write words to say)
Robyn looks at the flustered gerard as she thought back to him performing on the stage today. On stage he was so confident, so strong. Like anything could come his way and he could just turn to the thing and kick its a**. But right now Gerard seemed like a nervous wreck, he seemd so valurnable to Robyn at this instant. Finally gerard looked inside his coffee cup like he was giong to speak to it instead of Robyn and whispered,
"I'm sorry....about what I said and did yesterday."
Surprised at this sudden small but meaningful remark by Gerard, she just looked up at his face until she finally found the words to her voice.
Robyn: I-its alright....Im sorry that I smacked you...
Gerard: (gives off a small smile) Well to be truthful, I think I pretty much deseved that smack. Or maybe another thousand would'ev been more deserving for me.
Robyn: I think only one is all I can give to you for right now. (grins)
Gerard: So...are we alright?....
Robyn: heh yeah I think were alright now.
Gerard grinned back at Robyn. She looked so beautiful right now.
Right then the door to the used's bus swing open making both Gerard and Robyn jump. Out come Bert and another member of his band.
Bert: HEY, HEY, HEYYY! Look who it is! The two love friends! hahaha
(puts his arms around the two and pulls them torward him quickly)
Robyn and gerard squirm uncomfortablely in berts arms as he begins to speak again.
Bert: Hey were going down to the bar a few miles down the road! Whos gonna join?!
Robyn:Um thanks bert but I dont drink. (Robyn looks over at gerard waiting for what his answer is going to be.) Please say no, please say no. pleas say no! Robyn thinks to herself as gerard looks down at the dirt covered ground.
Gerard: Ah...um...I dont know man...havent we done enough drinking lately?
Berts Smirks gone and is looking at Gerard as if hes crazy.
Bert: What the hell? Are you going soft on me G-man? I thought we were drinking buddies! come on!! In know you want too!...dont leave me hanging man!!
Gerard: (gerard pauses looking at Robyn then away) I guess I could have one drink...(he answers in a small mumble)
Bert: NOW THATS THE SPIRIT! (He pats Gerards back and lets go of Robyn completely forgetting that shes there and starts to walk away with Gerard torward the bar.)
Not once does gerard try to look back at the stunned and hurt Robyn
as she now turns to walk away. Now the sunset had quickly disappered and covered Robyn and the concert grounds with darkness.
-END OF PART 7-

Paralized_Panda


carrieXchaos

PostPosted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 5:16 pm


berts an a** gerard noooooooooooooooo!!!
PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 6:58 pm


update, you... you ..... you poo face! (cause that is oh so threating lol)

carrieXchaos


Paralized_Panda

PostPosted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 1:04 pm


carrieXchaos
update, you... you ..... you poo face! (cause that is oh so threating lol)
(scared by your evil poo threat) ok! Ok! Ill will! eek lol
I'll make part 8 this friday night. ;']
PostPosted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 8:30 pm


Updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gerard Way003 InThe Flesh


carrieXchaos

PostPosted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 8:20 pm


Paralized_Panda
carrieXchaos
update, you... you ..... you poo face! (cause that is oh so threating lol)
(scared by your evil poo threat) ok! Ok! Ill will! eek lol
I'll make part 8 this friday night. ;']


haha D***STRAIGHT lol
PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 11:24 am


OMFG! I LUV IT AND BERT SUX! I always hate dhim but I don't know why. I get the same feeling as Robyn does when she's around him.

Ieros Baby567


carrieXchaos

PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 7:15 pm


bert is suppositly(sp?) a big drinker. i read so in AP. but you can never fully trust a zine but AP seems pretty honest.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 5:49 pm


UPDATE!!!!

carrieXchaos


Ieros Baby567

PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 4:08 pm


I demands an uppydate!
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