|
|
| Did you like "Night of Disaster?" |
| Yes |
|
100% |
[ 1 ] |
| No |
|
0% |
[ 0 ] |
|
| Total Votes : 1 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 2:06 pm
Tell me what you liked about the story, hated about the story, or just what I need to improve upon. biggrin
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 4:41 pm
Your powers of description were quite amazing. Your Sirius and James were dead-on, too. :]
I can't really think of what you need to work on... Maybe the characterization of Dumbledore? I dunno. It was pretty good all around.
|
|
|
|
|
|
carry on wayward daughter Vice Captain
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 4:27 pm
Really? thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 2:44 pm
I really like it...but where is Remus in all this?? You'd think he would hear if Lily and James were attacked, Sirius would have told him, right? I'm really hoping there will be more, because this is one of the better 'Lily and James lived!' fics I've seen in a while.
so...adding Remus would make me a VERY happy sponge... mrgreen
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
