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 Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 7:04 pm
There's no 4th book? Oh My Gosh! It can't end this way!
So here's a fun game we can play.
Make up a basic plot for a 4th book. What happens to Jacob? Do Bella and Edward get married? Have fun!
But first: RULES!
1. Be nice and don't criticize other people's ideas.
2. PG - 13
3. Have fun!
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 8:12 pm
but there is a fourth book....its called breaking dawn...
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 8:16 pm
Okay, so:
Enter with thirty pages of boring stuff. You know, EdwardxBella-y parts. Blah, Blah, yeah.
Then it gets a plot.
So, she, Edward, and company are at the Cullen house. They've just received word that Jacob is gone with the wind.
Bella: Blaming self, crying, freaking out, hurting Edward's feeling unintentionally.
Edward: Trying hard not to smile at said news. Oh, and comforting Bella. Even though his heart is breaking piece by piece because she's so upset over Jacob.
Strike numero one.
So, Bella, in her infinite wisdom, decides to go the the Reservation, to talk and apologize to Billy.
Upon arrival, she is cornered by the pack.
To put it bluntly, they verbally abuse her, and she runs home crying to Edward.
Eventually she decides that she won't marry Edward until they find Jacob.
Strike numero two.
So, the Cullen's set out to find the emo kid Jacob.
I won't bore you with the detail in between, but Jacob gets found.
Okay, so, against his will (lets say Emmett and Rose find him, just for kicks and giggles) he is forced into the same room with Bella and Edward.
Upon seeing him, Bella breaks down, you know, tells him how much she loves him, that she was terrified for him, that's she's sorry, blah, blah, blah.
Strike trios.
Edward then, like, freaks.
He proceeds to explain to Bella that he can't stand by anymore, letting others have her heart, that he can't stand her being in love with another man, blegh, blarg, angst.
Yeah, so, he leaves.
Like he did in New Moon.
Like, woah gone.
Like, see ya later Bells. It's been fun.
So then, BAM, Bella = ded. Again.
But, Jacob's there, so it's not as bad.
So, they're back in Forks, or whatever, together
when the Volturi come.
Okay, well, they're like
Where are the Cullen's?
And Bella's all
-Choke-Sob- They left.
So they're like
Okay, then. You're coming with us.
And then Bella is off the Italy, being held by the Volturi.
You see, they plan to switch her.
Anyways.
Back in Forks, the wolves go find the vampires
they ban together
rescue Bella
But, the Volturi are like
Kay, that's cool.
Switch her now.
Or she gets dead.
So, the book ends, with Bella drifting off into the start of the most painful days of her life, complete with a fully transformed and howling Jacob Black.
BUT WITH MORE DETAIL SO IT MAKES MORE SENSE. ._.
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 8:23 pm
Reels Okay, so:
Enter with thirty pages of boring stuff. You know, EdwardxBella-y parts. Blah, Blah, yeah.
Then it gets a plot.
So, she, Edward, and company are at the Cullen house. They've just received word that Jacob is gone with the wind.
Bella: Blaming self, crying, freaking out, hurting Edward's feeling unintentionally.
Edward: Trying hard not to smile at said news. Oh, and comforting Bella. Even though his heart is breaking piece by piece because she's so upset over Jacob.
Strike numero one.
So, Bella, in her infinite wisdom, decides to go the the Reservation, to talk and apologize to Billy.
Upon arrival, she is cornered by the pack.
To put it bluntly, they verbally abuse her, and she runs home crying to Edward.
Eventually she decides that she won't marry Edward until they find Jacob.
Strike numero two.
So, the Cullen's set out to find the emo kid Jacob.
I won't bore you with the detail in between, but Jacob gets found.
Okay, so, against his will (lets say Emmett and Rose find him, just for kicks and giggles) he is forced into the same room with Bella and Edward.
Upon seeing him, Bella breaks down, you know, tells him how much she loves him, that she was terrified for him, that's she's sorry, blah, blah, blah.
Strike trios.
Edward then, like, freaks.
He proceeds to explain to Bella that he can't stand by anymore, letting others have her heart, that he can't stand her being in love with another man, blegh, blarg, angst.
Yeah, so, he leaves.
Like he did in New Moon.
Like, woah gone.
Like, see ya later Bells. It's been fun.
So then, BAM, Bella = ded. Again.
But, Jacob's there, so it's not as bad.
So, they're back in Forks, or whatever, together
when the Volturi come.
Okay, well, they're like
Where are the Cullen's?
And Bella's all
-Choke-Sob- They left.
So they're like
Okay, then. You're coming with us.
And then Bella is off the Italy, being held by the Volturi.
You see, they plan to switch her.
Anyways.
Back in Forks, the wolves go find the vampires
they ban together
rescue Bella
But, the Volturi are like
Kay, that's cool.
Switch her now.
Or she gets dead.
So, the book ends, with Bella drifting off into the start of the most painful days of her life, complete with a fully transformed and howling Jacob Black.
BUT WITH MORE DETAIL SO IT MAKES MORE SENSE. ._. wow...that was very...funny...very well put...but seriously did u guys know that theres a 4th book?
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 12:05 pm
Yes, we know. XD
We're just...writing our own. P:
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 4:24 pm
Reels Okay, so:
Enter with thirty pages of boring stuff. You know, EdwardxBella-y parts. Blah, Blah, yeah.
Then it gets a plot.
So, she, Edward, and company are at the Cullen house. They've just received word that Jacob is gone with the wind.
Bella: Blaming self, crying, freaking out, hurting Edward's feeling unintentionally.
Edward: Trying hard not to smile at said news. Oh, and comforting Bella. Even though his heart is breaking piece by piece because she's so upset over Jacob.
Strike numero one.
So, Bella, in her infinite wisdom, decides to go the the Reservation, to talk and apologize to Billy.
Upon arrival, she is cornered by the pack.
To put it bluntly, they verbally abuse her, and she runs home crying to Edward.
Eventually she decides that she won't marry Edward until they find Jacob.
Strike numero two.
So, the Cullen's set out to find the emo kid Jacob.
I won't bore you with the detail in between, but Jacob gets found.
Okay, so, against his will (lets say Emmett and Rose find him, just for kicks and giggles) he is forced into the same room with Bella and Edward.
Upon seeing him, Bella breaks down, you know, tells him how much she loves him, that she was terrified for him, that's she's sorry, blah, blah, blah.
Strike trios.
Edward then, like, freaks.
He proceeds to explain to Bella that he can't stand by anymore, letting others have her heart, that he can't stand her being in love with another man, blegh, blarg, angst.
Yeah, so, he leaves.
Like he did in New Moon.
Like, woah gone.
Like, see ya later Bells. It's been fun.
So then, BAM, Bella = ded. Again.
But, Jacob's there, so it's not as bad.
So, they're back in Forks, or whatever, together
when the Volturi come.
Okay, well, they're like
Where are the Cullen's?
And Bella's all
-Choke-Sob- They left.
So they're like
Okay, then. You're coming with us.
And then Bella is off the Italy, being held by the Volturi.
You see, they plan to switch her.
Anyways.
Back in Forks, the wolves go find the vampires
they ban together
rescue Bella
But, the Volturi are like
Kay, that's cool.
Switch her now.
Or she gets dead.
So, the book ends, with Bella drifting off into the start of the most painful days of her life, complete with a fully transformed and howling Jacob Black.
BUT WITH MORE DETAIL SO IT MAKES MORE SENSE. ._. Oh my goddess I love it!!
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:00 pm
o...ok then...heres mine:
Bella and edward go all wedding bells
jake is buh bye and pissed
Edward is all don't worry about it
the family is like CHANGE HER! CHANGE HER!
Edward: ugh fine you bloodsucking fiends
Bella is all YAY!!!
Edward: *so sad*
Charlie...huh?
Bella gets bitten
Shes pretty much out fo service for a while
jake comes back and fumes over change
bella is like "don't hate me"
jake is like i don't like this
Edward is like "she wanted it"
BElla turns and gets really thirsty
shes all like BLOOOOOOOOOD
Edward is all SLOW DOWN
jake is like WTF??
Bella goes into public and all red eyed
ppl: OMFG A MONSTER
Edward: Bella! No!
Bella: can't... resist.... red
Edward *grabs her and gets her out of there*
Jacob wants to die now
Bella tries to stop drinking blood all together...doens't work
She kills somebody
Edward keeps her int eh house
The family: o s**t
Charlie...wait wheres bella?
Bella: Edward, look at me, I'm a monster!
Edward: everything will be all right.
um...i don't really know how to finish it...someone help? (sry i copied ur outline, Reels. it seemed simpler than other stuff)
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:32 pm
Hmm. Im too lazy to actually write much out, but all I really want is for Jacob to come back but not actually get with Bella, and for Bella to get changed.
Thats my wish list 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:08 pm
Alisox Hmm. Im too lazy to actually write much out, but all I really want is for Jacob to come back but not actually get with Bella, and for Bella to get changed. Thats my wish list 3nodding Hm. I agree with you. I'm too lazy. Here's my wish list: TEN WISHES I HAVE FOR THE FOURTH BOOK1.EDWARD DIES. Okay. Anything Else?2. Nope, that's pretty much it. But that's so sad!!! Why would you want Edward to die?3. A) Well, because he's a vampire. The world is better off. B) He's unhealthy for Bella to be around. C) It just makes things less complicated. You're mean.4. Yeah, well, that's the way it goes. Oh, wait I thought of something else. 5. EDWARD DIES. You already said that one. stare 6. Yes, but you didn't hear the rest. Okay...7. EDWARD DIES....BECAUSE I KILLED HIM!!!! Yeah, 'kay...but what about Bella? She'll go hide in a hole and die.8. So...Jacob turns out to be this genius and finds out a way to erase peoples memories to save Bella from missing Edward. Problem solved. stare 9. Oh, come on! I think it'd make a great story! stare 10. Okay, fine! How about this: Bella gets Edward, and Jacob goes to an alternate universe where he gets Bella, and Edward doesn't exist. (Because I killed him.) (sigh) Yeah, that'll work. rolleyes
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 2:31 pm
1. Jacob imprints on some pretty female truck driver and spends his time stalking her
2. Edward and Bella marry
3. volturi come and dance and then they're all like change her and charilie over hears and well... drama!
4. Jake comes back and says sorry, cause he's fianlly got his love and everybody's like thats cool
5. charlies like did you know about this to jake and he's like uh uh...
6. Volturi= CHANGE HER!!
7. Charlie tries shooting them cause he doesn' want bella to be changed, but he wants her to be happy.. so Edward and Jasper are like ugh not inner turmoil!
8. the rest of the promises are fullfilled, ahem
9. Bella gets changed
10. she ended up not craving blood as her power because as a human she was so nauseated by it and now eats nothing and they all live happily ever after, well except charlie who sad to say prbly would end up dead in this version...
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 2:53 pm
lildarkangel3001 shes all like BLOOOOOOOOOD Edward is all SLOW DOWN jake is like WTF?? lol the best quote ever.
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 3:23 pm
Ok heres MY idea.
Jacob leaves.
Bella= *sob* for like 12 pages.
Edward is like I'll go find him
*Later...*
Edward finds Jake.
Jakes like SCREW YOU.
fight. (Bum bum bum BUM)
Jake suddenly goes missing
Bella is sad for like 16 pages.
Jake comes back and says he's imprinted on a stripper.
Bella and Edward get married
Charlie has a freak out during reception.
Charlie tries to kill Edward.
*Cue Voulturi*
Voulturi get angry, very angry.
Bites Bella kills Charlie crying Grab shimp and leave
Edward is like what just happened.
Bella changes.
Goes after Voulturi.
BUT the Voulturi find out and band with the warewolves.
The Cullen meets some random vampires.
*fight*
They kill everyone.
BUT when in Italy Bella has a freak in the streets.
MUST...HAVE....YOUR......BLLLOOOOODDDDD
Edward: Oh. My. God.
They all restrain her.
Go back to the US (WOOT)
Merge familys with the other vampires.
Moves.
*20 years later*
Back in Forks.
Meets old version of Jessica....
END OF BOOK FOUR.
mrgreen
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 8:21 am
MysticKoi lildarkangel3001 shes all like BLOOOOOOOOOD Edward is all SLOW DOWN jake is like WTF?? lol the best quote ever. lol thank ya whee
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Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 8:24 am
Reels Yeah, so, he leaves.
Like he did in New Moon.
Like, woah gone.
Like, see ya later Bells. It's been fun.
So then, BAM, Bella = ded. Again. omg i love that quote....its awesome
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Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 1:14 pm
heart ~LOL!! You guys are HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~ heart
rofl lol blaugh xd
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