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 Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 7:18 pm
(Song that I made tonight...yea...enjoy)
If You Tried
You send me those lies,
You think I won't see,
But if you tried,
You'd know there's more to me!
(Chorus)
If you tried to know who I am,
If you tried to do what I can,
If you tried to manipulate me,
If you tried, you'd fail miserably!
You see me there,
My mind wandering free,
You see my cracking mask
And think you know the real me!
With that knowledge you gained,
You try learning why,
But with those feelings I feigned,
You'll never hear me cry!
*Chorus*
(Bridge)
But now I----
Am replacing the mask that you broke.
I never wanted to do
Any-God-damn-thing with you----!
Get out of my mind,
Get out of my life,
Or the last thing you'll see
Is a blood-covered knife!
(tune of chorus)
Don't you try to know who I am,
Don't you try to do what I can!
If understanding me is what you strive,
Then be prepared to stare down my 45!
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 7:54 am
*twirls* Nice Ithi, nice~! Now you should make some sheet music, record it in your room, get it in your name, and sell it!!!
XDDD DO IT!! I wanna hear some music with it~!
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 1:57 pm
zomg someone responded. and, i cant rly think of an original tune, i suck with music like that. and my friend said if u dont think of music beforehand, its so hard to think of it. and it's not that great, but thx
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Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 3:40 pm
Of course someone responded.
People don't like to visit our other forums...
Or maybe they just don't like posting.
*HINT HINT*
(means do some posting peoples!)
ANYWAY~!
Well, if you can't think of music, that's fine.
I'd like to know which friend said that.
I wanna learn how to do the whole music sha-bang.
(like, seriously. i wanna visit a studio and learn how they do it)
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 5:51 pm
heehee, im responding so long after u responded but wtvr, it was my friend rebecca, i guess u just try to come up with a tune with experimenting and then create lyrics to match it.
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