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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 8:36 am
I know this should go in the poetry section of the guild, but many members don't enter it, so I wished to post it here instead.....
please give me your opinions ok.....
My heart
My heart isn’t shattered Instead it is ice. I’m so cold, I feel devoid of warmth. No tears shall come, For I shall refuse them. I shall freeze them with my heart. My heart is frozen, and so are my emotions. They shall not thaw, unless it is my will My heart is solid, submerged in my frost I see with my mind, but feel with my heart But my heart is now numb, My mind is clouded, But I still can see and feel All that is gone I live in a memory A reflection of the future My dreams shall become my reality For reality, I can no longer see I froze my heart So that it may beat Without bursting into fragments So that my warmth only rests without breaking as well
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