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 Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 9:40 pm
Hey all. I wrote this about two days ago - it is really short. I just want to know what you guys think. And, please, don't try to be nice. I'm a big girl, I can take a beating. wink Here's the link to ff.net! Dying All Around Me And if you like it (or not) please review! 4laugh
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2007 9:44 pm
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 6:56 pm
It's not too short, if I'm allowed to post 100 word drabbles, then you most definitely can post this. It's really good, and honestly one of the few times that I've seen a first person introspective, that's actually good and in character. I don't think it's out of character, because it digs deep into his rationale and perspective, examining exactly why he hates being human and the uncertainty that comes along with it.
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 8:07 pm
Thanks! I'm glad to hear it. biggrin
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 10:45 pm
I would say it's a bit short, but other than that the story was awesome! heart biggrin heart
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 12:14 pm
silent_d_911 I would say it's a bit short, but other than that the story was awesome! heart biggrin heart Thanks! heart
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 9:43 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 10:03 pm
I thought it was really great!! 4laugh actually me wants to be a writer too ( when I grow up XD ) exellent story idea! wink
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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 5:36 pm
Gracie Boo Bear I thought it was really great!! 4laugh actually me wants to be a writer too ( when I grow up XD ) exellent story idea! wink Thanks!! I'm thinking about being an author. We'll see. biggrin
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 9:28 pm
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 9:44 am
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 2:01 pm
it's very sweet and romantic
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