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PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 7:19 pm


Name
Samantha Vere

Age
19

Birthday
September 23

Occupation
store clerk

Species
shape shifter

Most common forms
white ferret
white gray speckled cat
blue jay
robin

Abilities
Other than shape-shifting (which includes basic things) she has very few other abnormal abilities. One of the few is she can talk to animals but only when she is in animal form.

Gender
female

Sexuality
straight

Goals in life
Get a different job and a new living space.

Living space
Apartment/flat

Hobbies
writing, cooking, tricking people, hiking

Likes
sweets, technology, rodents, small animals, vegetables, fruit, sunset

Dislikes
eating meat, hunting, war, hate, lies, secrets, children (disobedient)

Personality
Samantha is a generally welcoming person in the fact that she can talk to almost anyone. Like almost any normal person she still has trouble talking to intimidating people or the opposite sex.

Character flaws
Samantha is habitually judgemental and tends to think that everyone lies or keeps secrets. She is also a bit loopy in the fact that she is slightly paranoid but not enough to make it disabling. In addition to that she keeps scores for her friends with a note pad that she keeps tucked away in her purse for her own amusement.

Biography
It was early on September 23rd seventeen years ago that she was born into this world. She was a gift to her parents yet at the same time a burden. They could not afford to have a child so they gave her to an adoption agency with tears in their eyes. They fully explained what she was and how she should not know until she is ten.

While at the orphanage many couples came by to look upon the faces of the children. She was often overlooked since she had a special profile and needed extra care because of her 'abilities.' It was a cool October morning when a couple came in. There names were Julianna and Steven Vere and they looked distraught. They explained fervently in accented words that they had lost there child and were looking for it. They left sobbing hearing the child was not there. One year later they came back to the orphanage and looked at the small list of special profiles. When they saw Samantha they looked shocked. The loved her instantly and took her home.

Her adoptive parents were just as good as any real parents could be. They pampered her at the right times and scolded her when she needed it. When it came upon her tenth birthday they both held there breath in anticipation. After the celebration were over they sat Samantha down on her favorite chair in living room and slowly explain. At the time Samantha loved the idea but slowly as the years progressed she learned that being what she wasn't as good as it first sounded. The first transformation, at the age of fifteen, was the hardest and most painful thing she had ever experienced.

She learned how to transform with ease as life progressed. When high school was over she moved out intending to forget about her past. It all comes down to one thing, she misses them greatly but now they are half a continent away.

Appearance
Samantha as almond shape olive green eyes that often front a sense of compassion. Her oval shaped face is outline by feathered layers of light brown hair that seems to be almost golden in the right light. Her skin is smooth and slightly tanned. She stands at approximately five foot four. Her most common outfit is a three quarter sleeve solid burgundy shirt, dark capri jeans, and black pumps. Occasionally she wears a vest over her shirts but that is uncommon. On colder days she wears long sleeve shirts (colors include shades of blue, purple, or green), jeans, a black trench coat with a fur lined hood, and black boots.

Roleplays touched
none yet
PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 7:40 pm


Clothing colors
Burgundy
Palatinate Purple
Ultra Marine
Myrtle
Gamboge (rare)
Rust
Peach Yellow


Clothing Style Preferences
casual general jeans and a t-shirt or a nice spring dress mainly halter top dresses
chic elegant dresses mainly in shades of red and occasionally black
sporty sweat pants or shorts with a t-shirt
pajamas comfortable pants with cute t-shirt

I know I might have gone overboard on this but at least I had fun doing it

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 8:12 pm


Name
Lilly

Race
mouse

Element
earth

Job
food gathering

Appearance
Lily was born in the middle of the winter in a small burrow. Under the big oak tree they were sheltered by many of the predators. Few cats could get under the oak tree and now hawks or eagles could see them. When she was just starting to wander out of the burrow three of her siblings were taken and eaten by cats. After that the family ran away from that place to the place where they now reside. Since then both of her parents have died from age. She can't find the three siblings that survived the cat attack.

History
Lilly was born in a small borrow below a large oak tree. As time passed she wandered further from the home. She came upon the place and was immediately accepted by the other mice.

Other
She is easily frightened and thinks that the princess could help her.

Role-plays touchedLibrary of Willow
PostPosted: Sun Aug 12, 2007 10:37 pm


Appearance
Alexander has soft silvery white hair that falls down to about his chin and dark blue eyes. He has a somewhat squared jaw line and a circular shaped face. He stands at approximately five foot eight and is usually wearing a white button down shirt and jeans. He is always wearing a silver round face armani watch and rectangular rimless glasses.

Name
Alexander Finn

Age
18

Bio/history
Alex grew up in a rich neighborhood but he didn't get very good grades. When he was young he would always love dressing up in different out fits and pretending he was walking down the run way. He never got along with his parents who were constantly pressuring him to become a lawyer. He frowned upon that job and he had a fight with them at the age of 18. This caused him to move out. Now he is going to a small college near by for basic education and he will eventually go to school for fashion design.

Sexuality
bisexual

Race
human

other
Loves sweets.

Gender
male

Pregnant
no

room:
number 2

roleplays touched
Brittain flats

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 3:14 pm


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 9:32 pm


Name
Samantha Chambre

Age
21

Birthday
August 28

Occupation
columnist

Species
shape-shifted (not aware)

Abilities
shape-shifting and animal communication (unaware of both)

Gender
female

Sexuality
straight

Goals in life
get a better job

Living space
flat number 8

Hobbies
writing, reading, shopping, indulging

Likes
designer clothing, shopping, sunshine, ferrets, cats, mice, pets, warm food

Dislikes
cooking, dogs, rude people

Personality
Samantha is generally easy going but if she is on a tight schedule she is prone to swearing and gets frustrated easily. She also takes a great offense to lying and holds grudges quite frequently. She doesn't like being challenged.

Character flaws
cares too much about what others think

Biography
Samantha was born into an upper class family which meant she always got the best of the best. The lifestyle took no effect on her since her parents were out every night at parties or big events. She was often left alone with the nanny who helped her get her school work done.

At the age of five she was attacked by a large German shepherd. To this day she is utterly afraid of dogs although she will tolerate smaller ones. The only time she will go near a dog is if someone else's life is in danger and they need help.

After finishing up four quiet years of high school she enrolled at Oxford university for a communications and journalism program. She was young for her age since she was put into school earlier by a year. She excelled easily and when she got out she found a flat and a job in town.

Appearance
Samantha has dark brown shoulder length hair. She has an oval shaped face and dark gray eyes. She has delicate frame that makes her look innocent although she is strong. Her arms have a slight amount of muscle on them and she has a semi-well endowed chest. She is always wearing heels.

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Britain Flats (flat number 8 )

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 4:16 pm


Name
Brian Coolar

Age
19

Birthday
November 3rd

Occupation
Model

Species
Used Book store owner

Abilities
none

Gender
male

Sexuality
bisexual

Goals in life
sell over a thousand books

Living space
flatt number 1

Hobbies
reading, reading, studying

Likes
books, rain, clouds, book marks

Dislikes
lies, sunshine, thunder and lightining

Personality
Brian is a gentle character. He tends to be paranoid by others motives. He falls in love quickly.

Character flaws
paranoid

Biography
Brian grew up in a small flat near the one where he lives in now. He inherited the book store. Other than that he had a pretty much average life.

Appearance
Brian has shaggy black hair with red and white stripes. He has a slightly pointed chin and slightly thin lips. He also has golden brown eyes that are usually lined with eye liner. He has an indistinctive jaw line. He is thin since he has many allergies and is also a vegetarian.

Roleplays Touched
Life in a Brittish Flat
PostPosted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 9:11 pm


Name
Devin White

Age
21

Birthday
August 28

Occupation
buisness owner

Species
wolf demon

Abilities
none

Gender
female

Sexuality
bisexual

Goals in life
has none

Living space
flatt number 7

Hobbies
reading, cooking, sewing

Likes
books, magazines, photos, art

Dislikes
rejection, interference with someone she likes

Personality
Devin has a strong personality meaning that she tends to push people around a lot. She tends to like people that are meek and innocent because she's usually pretty good at controling them.

Character flaws
control freak, rude

Biography
Devin was brought up in a slightly broken home. Her french mother left her father when she was ten to marry an american. She occasionally visited her mother in Seattle but she always dreaded the trips. On her trips to visit her mother she was often ignored and neglected. While at home in Manchester her father often spoiled her with surprises ranging from new clothes to cars. Her father just got her a car that she has been using for the past three months.

Appearance
Devin has long black hair that she usually keeps down. It is layered and frequently messy. She is usually wearing tanktops and gloves of some kind. She has a few tattoos on her body. She has angel wings on her back that look like they're dripping with blood. She has a Celtic design on her left upper arm and a ankh tattooed on her wrist. She has deep violet almond shaped eyes that and slightly arched eyebrows that make her look like she's kind although she's not. Her jawline is smooth and not obvious. She stands at approximately six foot two and is tall.

In her wolf form she is black with a red tipped tail. She also has a brown stripe running from her forhead to about the middle of her back.

Roleplays touched
Life in a Brittish Flat

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 7:02 pm


Name
Elysa Lamen

Age
15

Birthday
September 9th

Occupation
high school student - freshman/first year

Species
human

Abilities
basic magic

Gender
female

Sexuality
straight

Goals in life
Discover a way to save her brother from being killed via execution
Get married

Living space
A small cottage at the edge of the city

Hobbies
reading, flying on her broom stick, counting stars, studying

Likes
potions, creating things, magic, broom sticks, stars, wind, sun, moon

Dislikes
crowds, rain, storms, cloudy nights, war, hatred

Personality
Elysa is a very kind girl although she is very naive. The most important thing to her is accepting people for who they are.

Character flaws
too trusting

Biography
Elysa was born in a forest amongst the nyphs that rule the land. It was a family tradition that they were born with the knowledge of the forest. As she grew older she was taught a lot about magic. When she reaches her eighteenth birthday he will have to commence with a certain ceremony that will make her part of the secret society of the witches.

Although there is one problem. When she was five her mother was killed by a wizard that had taken over the society. Her father's response was to hunt don the wizard and kill him. Although sadly he was killed just after he completed his task. Now she is being taken care of by her eldest sister who is twenty five. Her sister has taught her many lessons to make up for the loss of her parents.

Appearance
Elysa has light sandy blonde hair and hazel eyes. Her face is round and her law line is gentle rather than squared and overly obvious. She has a tendency to look like she's about 12. She stands at approximately five foot two and she has slightly muscled arms.
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