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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2016 7:35 pm

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sweatdrop I was around a lot more when Kyou was the only artist, so I forgot about Roo. Bad Ebs, bad. But I'm sure Roo would have lots of fun trying to concept this Raevan.

And yes, I was thinking of it being more projected within the mind, but thinking more on it, you are probably right that making it more of a physical manifestation would play more into the hands of the essence's well essence, lol. Honestly this concept has a lot of potential for fairy tale type escapades! You could even play around with the idea of toadstools or mushrooms that the Raevan makes or can make "special." Like once eaten it could make almost anything happen! Oh my gosh, I'm getting Wonderland stuff popping into my head with this lol. I'll stop for now, but I hope I'm helping you think deeper into your chars possible powers.

Oh yes!! I would absolutely love to do all of that!! Ohh, so much I could do. And definitely have made me think of some things. Wonderland-like powers would be amazing! So many things I could do! But I don't know how much of that would be doable, I'll have to ask Kyou about that heh. But making "Magic Mushrooms" actually magical would be amazing.

Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2016 7:57 pm

Lol, yeah you'll definitely have a lot to work with, so you'll have to really think about where to make limits for the abilities and think about them like leveling up a char. I started Cordelia off with some basic stuff and limited her smoke abilities to just herself for the time being. Although I intend for them to grow and evolve over time as she does, I've also put a strangle hold on it of sorts. No matter how powerful her smoke abilities become, they will always and forever be tied back to either her feeding on smoke and/or her ability to retain heat. The hungrier/colder she is, the weaker she is. Keep things like that in mind.

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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2016 9:37 pm

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Lol, yeah you'll definitely have a lot to work with, so you'll have to really think about where to make limits for the abilities and think about them like leveling up a char. I started Cordelia off with some basic stuff and limited her smoke abilities to just herself for the time being. Although I intend for them to grow and evolve over time as she does, I've also put a strangle hold on it of sorts. No matter how powerful her smoke abilities become, they will always and forever be tied back to either her feeding on smoke and/or her ability to retain heat. The hungrier/colder she is, the weaker she is. Keep things like that in mind.

How does the powers look now? :3 I really liked your idea of the spore cloud, and the magic mushroom idea heheh. I thought that was an amazing idea. xD

Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2016 9:44 pm

I like the randomness of the magic mushroom! It leaves open for lots of plottings between you and other Labbies, but also keeps you from having total control over it. I think you are off to a better start with this concept than you were with a lot of your past ones. But I'm just one person helping foster ideas in you. You need more than just one person to bounce ideas off of. Keep asking people to check this out from time to time and see what others think.

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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2016 9:49 pm

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I like the randomness of the magic mushroom! It leaves open for lots of plottings between you and other Labbies, but also keeps you from having total control over it. I think you are off to a better start with this concept than you were with a lot of your past ones. But I'm just one person helping foster ideas in you. You need more than just one person to bounce ideas off of. Keep asking people to check this out from time to time and see what others think.

That's what I was thinking! That could bring SO many plots to the table. I love the fantasy aspect of that. And now it makes me want to watch Alice in Wonderland all over again. <3

I also feel like that will be a huge inspiration to him in his future, the story of Alice, I mean. He'll have a special connection to it and other fantasy stories that he wants to emulate in his own stories (him wishing to be a writer and all).

And you're right, I just hope other people feel that he's a well rounded character, or rounded enough to be molded into a beautiful raeven at least! And trust me, I agree with you in that my previous attempts at raevan creation were...mediocre at best...I just feel like this combo seems like a much more fun character in general than all my past attempts, lol.

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