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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 7:38 pm


Title-I never said I'd lie and wait forever, but I will.
Rating-pg-13- language
Disclaimer-I do not own my Chemical Romane or any of the people in the band.


This is my first one so please be brutally honest in your reviews. Tell me Yes or No on continuing.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 7:39 pm


CHAPTER 1



With your feet in the air and your head on the ground Try this trick and spin it, yeah Your head will collapse But there's nothing in it And you'll ask yourself. Mmmm The Pixies. What a great band to wake up to. I sighed as I looked over at my alarm clock. 6:45 A.M…Ugh I hate mornings, and Mondays. But I do love this song. I slowly rolled out of bed and softly sang along with the song. Then I went to the bathroom to shower, brush my teeth, ext. You know the routine. I got dressed in my school uniform that I surprisingly didn’t hate. I mean it did save me the trouble of picking out my own clothes, but on the down side it took away some of my individuality. And now I have to go wake up my brother, We’re twins and yes we do look alike. We have the same black hair, brown eyes and unfortunately the same height (more like lack of height). I just walked in his room since knocking would only waste my time considering he’s a very deep sleeper. “Frankie, Frankie. Mr. Frank Iero it’s time to wake up.” Well since whispering won’t work I guess I’ll have to do it the hard way…..what a shame. Hmmm water usually works, I’ll use it this time. “Aahhh! Huh? Why’d you do that again Lis?!” Ah my name comes out. Frank was lucky when he was named. He got something from this century at least. I got stuck with Felicity. I have every one call me Lis. Pronounced like list without the T. Some people are even adventurous and call me Lissie. I used to spell Lic but people pronounced it lick. And trust me it’s no fun to be called lick. “Well, you wouldn’t wake up the easy way soooo……” Frank just glared at me and pointed to the door. I took that as my sign to leave.

Frank’s and mine morning routine was a little odd, as I’m sure you can tell. I wake up first and do what I have to do then I wake him up. This way we don’t bump heads. I don’t mind getting up early, I’m not a morning person but compared to Frankie I’m a ray of sunshine. After I left Frank’s room, I made breakfast for the entire family. That’s another thing that I don’t mind doing. I love to cook. We we were both completely ready we left for school in the car that we shared. On the way we picked up our friend Ray. Ray has this small afro type thing forming on his head. I like to call him and his ‘fro’ the true definition of sex. Oh school, what a joy. With all those wonderful assholes just waiting to torture us. But then there’s our small group of friends that keep each other strong. Any way you look at it school is always an adventure to happen.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 7:41 pm


CHAPTER 2




“Mikes! Gee!” I yelled running to two of my best friends, the Way brothers.
“Lissie! Frankie! Ray!” Gerard screamed back running at us. We met in a hug while Frank, Mikey, and Ray walked towards us. “Geez, guys control yourselves. You just saw each other Friday and people are giving us those creepy looks…” Mikey shuddered. “I hate those creepy looks. I always think they’re gonna come at me with forks. We all stared at Mikey. I sighed. “ Ok Mikes. First who walks around with a fork? And second those creepy looks are more like ‘God, I would love to just spoon out they’re eyes’. This time every one stared at me. “ So people walk around with spoons but not forks?” Gerard laughed. “ I would love to go through your’s and Mikey’s minds sometime. “Ewww” Mikey and I said in unison. “That’s disgusting. And yes people would walk around with spoons and not forks. If you put a fork in your pocket it’ll poke you, but if you put a spoon in your pocket it’ll just rub you…Get Down!” I yelled and got on the ground with the boys doing the same as three footballs flew over our heads. Frank flicked off the laughing jocks and we all got up. “Come on guys, we need to get in the building anyways” Mikey said hanging his head a little. As we were going in, I turned around and flicked off the jocks again, only making them laugh harder. Stupid pricks. The day went on as usual with the jocks teasing us and us telling them to ******** off. But while I was switching my books at my locker some kid that I had seen hanging with the jocks came up to me. He said some stupid stuff about me pretending to be his ‘special friend’ to freak out his parents. He even said he’d pay me. He was pretty much implying that he wanted to use my ‘freakiness’ for his own good. I started laughing me a** off and I chocked out a no. I told Gerard about it and he got angry. I don’t see why though we were all pretty used to being called freaks. I guess because he was asking me to sell myself and that would put me on the same level as a prostitute, well not exactly the same level but close. The thing is I actually like him getting mad at another guy over me. It’s kinda like jealousy right? If you can’t guess I have a crush on Gerard. A huge one and I have for a while now. Who wouldn’t? He’s artistic, he has an amazing voice (which I have dreamed of him singing to me with hundreds of time) , he’s sweet, and he’s gorgeous which is like an extra cherry on a hot fudge sundae. The only person who knew though was of course Frank. We’re twins so obviously we’re gonna tell each other everything. I even knew he had a crush on a girl named Jessie.


When school ended we all went over to our friend Bob’s house. The boys kept talking about a band and I did m homework. What can I say I’m a nerd. Frank and I eventually went home, I told him about what that kid asked me, and he laughed. My own twin brother didn’t get angry. I went to bed thinking about it.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 7:42 pm


Opinions, thoughts, suggestions?

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 8:46 am


I love it. More Please
PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 2:34 am


It's good, brake up the text a bit so it is easier to read.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 7:32 pm


Write MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please.
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