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boy212367

PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 6:45 pm


I worked on it, but my internet went down and didn't finish. Tell me the truth.

(siren)
Hey! HEY! PUT YOUR HANDS IN THE AIR!!!

i regret nothing

ARE YOU LISTENING!? HANDS UP!

i laugh at those i killed today

I'M GONNA SAY ONE MORE TIME! HANDS UP!

there is one thing i do regret....

ALRIGHT YOU ASKED FOR IT! (Gunshot)

i didn't kill who i was sent to kill.




"Mommie! Mommie i want apple juice."
"Okay sweetie hold on."
(Looks out window)
"Mommie! Mommie look!"
"What, What?"
"It's a light! Oooo it's soooo bright!"
"What is that...."
"It's getting closer...."
"......Oh my god.....Sweetie! Come on we have to go."
"Mommie where are we going?"
"Just come!"
(Both run outside)
"It's......it's.....really here.....!!!!! Oh MY G-AAHHHH!!!!-"
(Explosion. Kills Mother and daughter.)

..................
..................
..................
(Beep)
Online. Machinery: Functional. Memory chip: Damaged. Preparing to fix.
Connecting..........Rebooting....(Long beep)

(Robotic lifeform emerges from smoke)

Where....who....what am I?
(Looks at man)

Analysis: Human. 50 percent Water. 20 percent gases. 30 percent-

"Whoa! A robot! A freakin robot!"
(Robotic lifeform grabs him by the neck, choking him)
"You. Human. Where is the nearest power source?!"
(No answer, only tiny breathing.)
"Tell me now!"
(Dies)
"What is wrong with you!?"

Analysis: Dead.

"Hmph."
(Throws aside)


To be continued?
PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 11:15 am


LOL! I love the first thing with the cop screaming at the dude to put his hands up.

Hmm...you could put them in a screen play format or add more of a story to them. But I think you could create a screen play for a play, movie, whatever. I think adding a little but more story you could have a very good beginings for something really cool. mrgreen It's really funny though.


kappi papi


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WereCat636

PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 8:34 am


wow thats really creative! smile
PostPosted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 11:33 am


LOL eek Its shakespeare quality! 1st class!

t h r e a t - n i i s a n

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