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 Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 3:48 pm
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: A little Naru/Sasu ,but thats not the main part of the story.
Time Zone: After Sasuke joins the bad guys.
"YOU WORTHLESS PIECE OF TRASH!"Orochimaru screamed at what once was his greatest fighter.He was so angry he slapped Sasuke to the ground. "You are worthless to me now." Orochimaru pulled the young man by his raven hair and dragged him outside in the pouring rain through the mud covered grounds."You worthless worm!" he screamed has he pulled him.It was the 15th mission that month Sasuke failed.Orochimaru had had it.Maybe the boy WAS just a waste of time.The snakey man stopped in the middle of woods."This shoudl be a good place for you to stay." he said evily.
Sasuke sat the entire night.He hadn't said a word since he failed his first mission.He didn't know what to do.His face appeared emotionless,but has Orochimaru walked away he cried inside.That was the last person that would have had any use for him.The night seemed to last forever,but slowly Sasuke fell asleep.
In the morning he woke in a daze.It was beautiful birds and other creatures seemed to sing just for him and yet he stil felt wrong and ill.
[to be continued when i feel like it xd ]
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 4:21 pm
Angst... Wow. Keep writing.
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 4:37 pm
Sasuke stood and started to walk.His arms and head hung over.He kept walking not knowind were he was going.Soom he saw the village he grew up in...The Villiage Hidden in the leaves.Naruto and Sakura just so happened to be right in front and saw him.
"You..." Sakura said sadly.Sasuke's looked up at the voice.
Naruto looked away and started to walk.Then soon ran to Tsunade. "The traitor is here." Naruto said not daring to say his name.
Tsunade sat slient for a mintue then choked out. "He is allowed to go to the Uchiha lands,but that is all,tell him that."
Naruto didn't want to,but he ran back and told the raven haired young man coldly. "Now go." the blonde boy said coldly.
Sakura walked behind her squad member and looked back at Sasuke then looked away in fear and regret.
Sasuke stood were he was until it was late,then slowly walked into the village.He sighed.
[to be continued,its not a long fanfic]
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 4:38 pm
A fairly good start, but you know you'll have to explain a lot as you continue right? Like what's making Sasuke fail so many missions and such. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 4:39 pm
paradoxal_gemini A fairly good start, but you know you'll have to explain a lot as you continue right? Like what's making Sasuke fail so many missions and such. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 2:35 pm
When Sasuke entered the village it seemed has though everyone knew a traitor had came.Doors slammed and windows shut.Childern playing in streets soon ran to their homes for dear life.The few people who stayed out looked down on Sasuke with fear and disgust.Kids who are now pre-teens that used ot think of Sasuke has the coolest guy in the world now spit horrible words at him.Sasuke's body told him to destory them all.The curse mark burned worse then it had before.Yet his mind and heart kept saying they're right,leave the innocent alone.That's what happened on all his missions.His body,mind,and heart seemed to be at war and was tearing him apart slowly.When he stopped to look through a shop window filled with flowers that was a shop were Ino worked.Amost a smile came across his face,but it was to late.A woman dumped dirty dish water from above on Sasuke.He was soaked ot the bone. "Leave our village you dirty scum traitor!" it was out of all people..Ino.
[to be continued]
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