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Long_Time-No_Sea

PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 5:45 pm


.:-~RP_is_me~-:.
Out of all the people in the world that don't believe in God. The one who believes least was chosen by God himself to be part of a curse called the curse of the Chinese zodiac. There are 11 people in this curse. There are 6 men, and 5 women, but the girl wasn't part of the curse until she met HIM.
He is zodiac cat. She loved him so much, but didn't care about the fact that she could never kiss him. When his old teacher came, his true form came to see. She was afraid that they wouldn't trust her again, and so she went to look for him. When she found him, for the first time in his life, she kissed him. He didn't transform into a cat or anything. Instead, he turned back into a human. A few years later, the curse re started. Now, her great, great, grand-daughter, is now the legacy of the mouse. This time the curse is 6 women, 5 men, and a boy instead of a woman. Her name is Yuki.
This is who she is.

Her name:Yuki
Her current age:14
Her Appearance:User Image
Her background:When she was young, her parents hated her. They didn't know their grand parents on her fathers side were cursed, and so they didn't expect this. At the first school dance she ever went to, a boy had touched her. It made a puff of smoke appear and she was on the ground. A small grey mouse. After that, she never touched anyone. It wasn't until later that she learned that she just couldn't touch boys. Now she has no friends and is almost always scared to be near people.  
PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 6:30 am


Very interesting. biggrin

Sweet, but probably a personality. I liketh the personality the best so that would be good to add. xD

LadyAlisyn


Wulfy07

PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 2:38 pm


oh sorry iv taken it off now im so sorry sorry sorry
anyway its a nice consept plus it makes her look collective
PostPosted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:22 am


Lol, the first thing that pops into my mind? A very close spin off of Furuba that made me LOL because the girl's name is 'Yuki.'

To make this work, better define the poor girl; why her parents hate her(though I've seen Furuba and read the manga so I know, but people who don't know the series don't know.) What was she like before the curse? What is she like now? She seems like a Hotaru-type from Sailor Moon from the breif description.

But other than more depth and background on the curse and such(unless you're going to reveal that in later Rp) then it's pretty good. Nice job in using the Gaia Avatar for her appearance

Xeter-Fuchsin

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