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Xaneus Quintaine

PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 7:21 am


Name: Xaneus Quintaine
Alias: Crysis
Age: 18
DoB: May 19, 1988

Height: 6'0"
Weight: 159
Build: Slender, Athletic
Eye Color: Black
Hair Color: Black

Alliance: None

Powers As Follows:

-Power One: Unrelenting Darkness- Xaneus begins to emit a black aura which glows with white outline that also appears in his eyes. He loses self-control and acts somewhat of a heartless, which also makes him lose his self-conscious. But his newfound assassin-like speed and great strength almost compared to that of Cyborg will make up for his other losses.

-Power Two: Dark Warrior's Blade- This dark power gives Xaneus a chance to use his katana to the fullest extent of it's power. Usually Xaneus would hold his katana loosely, but once grasped tightly, The blade becomes larger and filled with enormous power. A thick aura surrounds the katana completely, thus giving it's size and indefinite strength.

-Power Three: Oblivion's Scorn- His most devastating attack used as a last resort, The Darkness takes over his body after a certain amount of using Unrelenting darkness. He uses his katana, unleashing a series of slashes and cuts combining his martials arts for the times when he is in a position where he can't use his katana. If the opponent hasn't fallen to the first attack, he finishes by forcefully stabbing the sword into the ground. Huge cracks on the surface releases all his dark power creating an life threatening explosion that takes down the enemy and possibly Xaneus.

Items As Follows:

-Item One: Osafune (Katana)
-Item Two: Desert Eagle
-Item Three: Martial Arts

Physical Description: He basically is human wearing a black shirt with a sleek black drenchcoat overtop of it. Black jeans, black shoes. Wears dark gloves with spiked wristbands that almost come over his knuckles.

Personality: Xaneus is a kind fellow if tooken the wrong way, you may regret thinking of him as such. But he is kind hearted, honest, friendly. He is almost rarely angered by anything. He can be courageous at times but would rather someone else do it than himself.

Background/History: Xaneus was a young boy of the age 8 when his father died in a robbery of a bank. He admired his father since he was someone to look up, to protect the weak and needy. He wanted to be just like him someday when he grew up. But to see his father before his eyes, covered by a sheet, made him brake down in utter sorrow. He's lived with his mom, also trying to keep her happy by doing his best to help around the house. Yet, although his mother seem less upset about his father being gone, Xaneus just couldn't withold his feelings. He knew he need to get out of this state of sadness and depression. 10 years had passed and durung those 10 years, he had learn from his Master he had began to see when he was 12, how to control Darkness and use a Katana properly. From There he had went on his own to Bludhaven
PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 7:22 pm


Great details. 3nodding

Omagi


Xeter-Fuchsin

PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 11:30 pm


I'm not to big on this character. I feel that you really put more thought into the powers he possesses rather than into the character himself. Like, if he became so depressed how did he muster up the will power to train? Who is his master and how did he meet him? What happened to his mother? There's no fuel to his character for what he does in the description; it's like a small contradiction that doesn't make much sense.
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