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Japanesevinyl

PostPosted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 7:24 pm


Random title. Ignore it XDDDD I have started to draw more often so i thought i'd scan in something i drew today. Even though the scanner killed the colors. *kicks scanner*

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C+C very welcome as usual...

And i know her hips are too big...and her lower torso is too long. @____@ i realized it after i colored it. *doh*
PostPosted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 9:43 pm


Pretty. (^^) The real problem is the anatomy - which you already know - so I'll point out other things like how the arms seem to lack bones and seem to be molded out of jelly. She also needs clearer definition on her shoulders... her frame seems to go from a heavy head to a frail and a tad too long torso to a huge bottom half. Also, the positioning of her nipples and curve of her breasts make her left breast look wider and flatter while the right breast abit more... perky. sweatdrop Also the right breast's n****e could prolly be drawn further in as her upper torso doesn't seem to correspond to her lower half of her body, only her head. (^^)

Basically some fix in anatomical structure and it's fine. (^^) Loving the colors~ heart

Elysia Lovette


Anatole_serial

PostPosted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 9:43 pm


And the brightness is too bright! I couldn't distinguish her skin at first gonk
It's distracting :S
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