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My first one:
Name: Kakorata (cack- o- Rat- ah)
Race: Human
Age: 27
Weapons: Shurikin 30 count, Long sword, rough armor
Ablitities: knows how to cook rather well
Appearance: His armor is rough and made of a iron found in very few locations. The spikes on his knees and shoulders are sharp and can be used as a melee weapon. Underneath his helmet is a mask around his mouth. He stands about 6'1" and weighs 428 with the armor.
Occupation: Warrior

My second one (typically for Forest RP's)
Name: Namndo (Nam- doe)
Race: Reaper
Age: ???
Weapon: Scythe
Abilities: can cast small healing spells on himself and others
Appearance:
His cloak is made of a fine fabric made from silk worms in Southern China. His scythe was once blessed with the powers to reap lost souls, but he gave up reaping. The skulls on his arm are those of relatives. He stands 5'7" tall and weighs about 126.
Occupation: None
My third (rarely used):
Name: Florand (Floor-Rand)
Race: Human
Age: 21
Weapon: none
Ablitities: Can cast advanced pyro spells.
Appearance:
He wears a blue coat around a black tank top. There is a alchemy symbol on his back. (It allows him the create fire.) His pants are also black and have small tears on the bottom. He stands about 6'1" and weighs about 156.
Occupation: Alchemist

Any feedback would be greatly loved...

Can Cook? No clue what that is.

Power of life, Far to vague, do you mean he brings back the dead to full life rather then simple undead minions? Keeping it simple a simple change to black/dark magic would work well. But power of life, that would make him, at lest, a demigod, I see those two wards and I'm thinking he can wish any one dead, cuss he has power over there lives. At the lest Explain it a bit smile

As fore your latter Character, Unless he is unable to cast standard level pyro magic, I would remove "basic and" its assumed you can do the small stuff if you can do the big stuff. wink

And It Duse not look like Auto mail from FMA, its a cloth, or thin leather, glove, with leather or metal plates to armor the hand, from what I can see. sweatdrop