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Dark-Flame-Warrior

PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 7:36 pm


ok so i just now got accepted so im going to make my character and maybe it would be cool if i could get invited into a RP that would suit me maybe??? well lets let you decide if i can or can not...... BIO:

Name biggrin ark-Flame-Warrior
Roleplay Name: Dark Oblivion
Description: User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
Age: 17
Story: since i was 11 years old i was pushed around and mocked and casted away, all i wanted was a friend who could be there for me but everyone pushed me aside. One night while i was walking through a dark alley way to my house i was attacked by small shadowed monsters, i tried to get through the alley way but the had me trapped, they jumped to attack, then a shining light appeared and i felt something in my hand, it was some form of sword, i heard a voice whispering in my ear but nobody was there. it said "keyblade" i knew that this weapon was now a keyblade. the shining light came from the tip of the blade and i looked around and the creatures were gone. the voice spoke again "heartless........guardian.....chosen" since that day i have trained myself with the blade and fought many battles against these "heartless" and had no idea why they kept attacking. from the voice it sounded as if i were a chosen guardian or something. it has been 6 years since that day and i still have no reason why i have this weapon.
Personality: silent, only talks when talked to. does not express emotions very well.

yes i know its a bit of a kingdom hearts knock off but KH is my favorite game and maybe i could be put into a roleplay. i cant start my own well.....because.....i am not good at it. please consider inviting me into a roleplay
PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 1:26 pm


One thing, its in First person, Few RPer's respect this format, I would switch to a third person format, this lets you have a larger and more detailed character sheet and posts.

It might take some getting used two, but it will help (Normally) you get accepted, as most of the better RP's out right ban First person.

hop this helps smile

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 1:34 pm


Maybe you should write about your character for description rather than using your avatar, not many people like it when people do that...

Btw your signature rules xD
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