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 Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 8:58 pm
Heart’s last beat
No one cares
No one cares
As you fall asleep.
The alcohol runs in to your veins
The blood runs from them
If this is death then it feels great
You’re at the happiest now
At your life’s end
Your blood dirty the water
Like everything else
You ruin the natural color of everything
As away you ******** it up
Mess it up and screw it up
Tears run from you eyes
Tears of happiness
That you won’t mess anything up again
Ever
You save everyone from your self
No more sceams
No more hits
Its not your fault anymore
You are free
And they are free of you
No one will be mad because of you ever again
You save them
You body begins to turn cold
You slip in and out of consciences
You smile to you self one last time
As your heart beats its last beat
pleaz tell me what you think
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 11:55 am
wow thats amazing. i wish i was good at poetry like you o.o
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WeCanLiveLikeJackAndSally
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Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2007 4:38 pm
its good but it doesnt ryme
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Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 8:45 am
feels like...im gonnna die...beautiful thats what i think burning_eyes
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RealCaptainRavenBlackwing
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Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 10:48 pm
Wow, thats awesome, it may noy rythme, but it has a great flow to it
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