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ObscureFortitude

PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 10:55 am


Death's Shadow


Dark, mysterious, cold
Death lurks around the bend
Satan attacks two fold
No one to defend

Breathless in the night
Flight of fear overpowers
Stumble and fall without a sight
Crouches behind the ally, cowers

Tall, looming shadow
Sword raised high
Pierces like the arrow
The mercy always shih

Swift as the breeze
A life wisped away
A soul now seized
Sadness makes way
PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 11:01 am


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See the wind upon this land
Dancing ore the trees

Hear the jackal cry aloud
As gay as he can be

Aloft a voice this tune doth rise
Layn our hearts to praise

Christ our Lord accost His own
In this day and age

Tarry not yon kithen soul
Avow the time approch

Arise all to thyn sky above
For feeble are we not

Spring forth we all an' take our lot
Aye, we take it right

God assigns it to us now
And ner neglect it's flight

ObscureFortitude


ObscureFortitude

PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 11:13 am


Silence Is Spoken


Where silence is spoken
The great worriors of old arise

Saints of the new and old come forth
See here, the Body is weak

Awaken, O saints
For our time is nigh

Our Great Lord God beckons us
O, He beckons us to His side

Quiet is the voice in which He hails
Narrow is the path that we must tread

In darkness there is light
In hardship there is song

Praise His name all you who are deaf
Praise His name all you who are mute

Praise Him all you who are ill
Praise Him both big and small

Praise Him all you saints

All creation joins us in chorus
For His name is great

Father, we plea, You show us Your face
God, we cry, You leave us not

The Prince of Darkness crouches
O, he crouches at our door

This world, so dark and lonely
To him has fallen fast

This race, mighty and strong
Cries to You, O God

Raise us up on eagle's wings
Arouse us from our slumber

Beckon us once again, Mighty God
Beckon us to Your side

We will tread these lands
We saints of old

Sound the trumpet and the symbols
Cry out, for our time has come

Arise, O church from your recess
Awaken from your long respite

Christ, The Lord, has come at last
Praise Him, who, from all blessings flow

He is on high
He is our Lord

And we will provail
For He is our Great Commander

We cannot fail, O saints
For our God leads us on to victory

Amen!
PostPosted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 12:51 pm


you're pretty good i like your poems alot especially silence is spoken

UchiHime


X_x Undying Angel x_X

PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 7:47 am


thee are amazing i write poems but im not as good as you
PostPosted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:06 pm


they're all so wonderful
i wish i could write as beautifully as you

stephie_gurl


ObscureFortitude

PostPosted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 4:26 pm


Thank you! blaugh But please don't put yourselves down. Everyone has their own style, and every style is different. That doesn't mean that your worse or better then someone ealse. You style is just different; your own. Be proud of your style! 4laugh
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